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Renee (Pres of Baby James Foundation) ~.
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November 12, 2007 Baby James Foundation Commercial-1st attempt
June 13, 2009 11:09 AM EDT
(Updated: October 13, 2009 12:19 PM EDT)
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Here is my first attempt to make a commercial for our foundation. I already see a lot of things to change but I thought I would play with this and see what I could do.
To Groups: Unite 4 the children, NEVER EVER EVER EVER GIVE UP..........., Survivor's Forum, Nonprofit Nation, video vault, Video Destination, Help me get points for a cause, Point Fairies, Helping hands, ~Because I Care~, No Approvals Needed!, Baby James Prayer Chain Group, Gather Broadcasting, Survivors Of Abuse, Organize America, Videos as Art
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Comments: 25
Ah yes ... still needs a little work but it is amazing even so in this first draft. I couldn't stop watching. Loved the background soundtrack. :)
Thank you Lee never done this kind of thing before, I had fun. Will for sure do some more playing with it.
well done
I, too, thought the sound track gave it a lot of heart. It will be interesting to see future variations!
Thank you all
Nice video, well put together.
Renee, this is awesome. I love the child's voice, speaking uninterrupted, making sweet observations. If that does not convey innocence that needs protecting, nothing will. The soft guitar music is perfect and the photos are lovely. Maybe it needs a bit of tweaking, but I wouldn't change it too much. Don't lose that innocence!
Thanks Jan I really liked the voice too. Was thinking of using James but since I have no mic little hard to do. Our cell phones we can record but no way of sending to computer that I know of.
I left some vital information out like the url for one.
it looks really good to me
Hey it's great, I don't know that I would change anything.
Not too much tweaking to do. The child's voice really pulls it together. Nice work Renee!
I like the child's voice and the flower in the hand. :)
Renee this is a very good video i think it gets the word out.Keep up the great work.
PN
very well done!
very good!
You did a great job Renee !! I loved the music !! Thank you.
Hugs, Barbie
I think it's an awesome start.
haunting~effective~
Thanks Purr
Good Job
The only thing I'd change is have in the background-"perhaps" somewhat distantly, a picture of a headline maybe- than close it up QUICKLY, in black of one who didn't get help.
Just a "morbid" thought of mine.