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Cynthia B.
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April 12, 2006 "forever" (live)
March 22, 2008 09:36 PM EDT
(Updated: March 22, 2008 10:05 PM EDT)
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This is a live performance of a brand new original song I wrote a couple of weeks ago. I performed it last week, and I hope you enjoy it.
Lyrics:
he felt frayed at the caller/
he couldn't quite make out her words/
but he knew that he awed her/
though he found her parlor games absurd//
he could not begin to tell her/
all of her well-worn jokes that he prized/
so he'd stammer and falter/
as he slipped into his thin disguise//
refrain: he's a cypher/
she wrote in semaphore/
they were meant to be together/
ever after/
they fell to laughter/
who promised true love is forever//
she did all of her homework/
doing research at the library/
though sources said, "he's a jerk"/
she was not cowed by his history//
so she arranged a meeting of their minds/
and he agreed with a vague consent/
cause they could both read between the lines/
and shared the same ironic sentiment//
refrain
he was afraid when he called her/
though he could now make out at her words/
the distance could not be taller/
but they soared above the line of birds//
refrain x2
©2008 Cynth McGarvie-Bage
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