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A Photo by Katharyne T.

Sep 5, 2009 | comments: 6

ravi bedi Nov 6, 2009, 10:46am EST

Nicely done. I'd like to live in that hut.

A Photo by George Vreeland Hill .

Oct 21, 2009 | rating: 10 | comments: 5

ravi bedi Oct 22, 2009, 10:22pm EDT

Wonderful pictures, all of them.

Are You A...... by ~*Jackie Ferrari*~

Nov 14, 2008 | comments: 14

ravi bedi Aug 29, 2009, 10:19am EDT

Followers always. I hardly ever got along nicely with the leaders. They didn't have the leadership qualities.

Fill In The Blank------ by ~*Jackie Ferrari*~

Dec 20, 2008 | comments: 22

ravi bedi Aug 29, 2009, 10:16am EDT

My favorite way to be good to myself is to help the needy

As I Have Gotten Older........... by ~*Jackie Ferrari*~

Apr 12, 2009 | comments: 17

ravi bedi Aug 29, 2009, 10:14am EDT

I miss my youth, but now I love my twilight years.

Dream Visit by marie Pinschmidt

Jul 30, 2009 | rating: 10 | comments: 22

ravi bedi Jul 30, 2009, 8:51am EDT

May you have more such dreams of happiness.

A Photo by Trudy P.

Jul 30, 2009 | rating: 10 | comments: 21

ravi bedi Jul 30, 2009, 8:47am EDT

Lovely

A Photo by George Vreeland Hill .

Jul 27, 2009 | rating: 10 | comments: 3

ravi bedi Jul 27, 2009, 10:28pm EDT

wonderful!

The Grand Piano by ravi bedi

Jul 25, 2009 | comments: 4

ravi bedi Jul 26, 2009, 3:21am EDT

Oops! Something went wrong during formatting. I've edited the damn piece.

The Grand Piano by ravi bedi

Jul 25, 2009 | comments: 4

ravi bedi Jul 26, 2009, 3:07am EDT

Marie, I wanted you to read this and there you are! Eventually, I managed to acquire one that looked like a piano from the outside, but my heart sank when I opened the lid and peeped inside! Now that's another story.

Cheryl, thank you for your thoughts.

By the way, that Air Vice Marshal eventually became the Governor of an important state.

I saw my friend's boyfriend with another girl... by Lalaine D.

Jul 12, 2009 | rating: 10 | comments: 38

ravi bedi Jul 15, 2009, 10:08am EDT

This is a debatable issues, and you are the best judge since you know them all. My best advice, use your own judgement. Period.

And hope for the best.

A Photo by Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom'

Nov 9, 2008 | rating: 9.6 | comments: 74

ravi bedi Jul 14, 2009, 10:15pm EDT

This is amazing!I'm throwing my paints away.

A Photo by Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom'

Dec 17, 2008 | rating: 9.8 | comments: 68

ravi bedi Jul 14, 2009, 10:13pm EDT

Stunning! Teach me photoshop will you?

A Photo by Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom'

Nov 14, 2008 | rating: 9.8 | comments: 46

ravi bedi Jul 14, 2009, 10:12pm EDT

How much do they charge for say 5 miles?

A Photo by Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom'

Dec 16, 2008 | rating: 10 | comments: 59

ravi bedi Jul 14, 2009, 10:11pm EDT

I like the way you've treated the hair. Great idea.

I saw my friend's boyfriend with another girl... by Lalaine D.

Jul 12, 2009 | rating: 10 | comments: 38

ravi bedi Jul 14, 2009, 10:08pm EDT

Leave them alone. You may do more harm in raking up the issue.

Letting Go by Aaron Lazar, (author of LeGarde Mysteries)

Apr 30, 2009 | rating: 10 | comments: 40

ravi bedi Jul 11, 2009, 1:26am EDT

I do let go and write like wind, only to be humbled by my critters. Like Marie, I've edited my stories a hundred times and am still not convinced they are worthy of publication. Best thing to do is to dump them in some far corner for six months. Let them accumulate some dust and then pick them up again.

(Easier said than done. You will edit it another hundred times!)

So god be with you.

Writing on the River by Aaron Lazar, (author of LeGarde Mysteries)

May 19, 2009 | rating: 10 | comments: 20

ravi bedi Jul 11, 2009, 1:19am EDT

I think the best ideas come in the early hours of the mornings. Unfortunately, you are far from the keyboard... and you curse when the recall button in your brain fails most of the time! I'd rather take my paint and canvas to the riverside and produce some trash!

Dialog Tags by Aaron Lazar, (author of LeGarde Mysteries)

May 29, 2009 | rating: 10 | comments: 33

ravi bedi Jul 11, 2009, 1:13am EDT

'C' of course. No doubt about that. However, the problem arises when there are more than two people talking. I suppose their actions/expressions should work before they open their mouths.

Thanks for sharing, Prof. Aaron!

For Writers: The Hook by Aaron Lazar, (author of LeGarde Mysteries)

Jun 11, 2009 | rating: 10 | comments: 13

ravi bedi Jul 11, 2009, 12:58am EDT

You are amazing...and there's so much to learn from you. Below are some of the opening lines of a few stories I wrote in recent times. Do they impress?

"Richard Johnson had never in his life seen anything more beautiful than the damsel at the grocer’s that morning."

“Murder – Murder – Murder.” A scream ripped through the dead of the night, well above the rumbling of the meter-gauge train speeding through the deserts of Rajasthan.

“I spent the better part of my life under the dreadful shadow of the man I called my father."

"Life in the Air Force was one great party..."

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