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Of blankness [Thursday] by Kushal Poddar

May 21, 2009 | comments: 48

aratma d. May 21, 2009, 8:07am EDT

lovely description of the neverending quest for expression

Territorial Dispute- Humor Monday by Elsie Duggan

May 11, 2009 | comments: 38

aratma d. May 11, 2009, 3:01am EDT

Funny little creatures they are :). Hope it turns out well with no visits to the vet.

Kissies for all of you.

Flash Fiction Contest - Ascent by libramoon C.

Mar 29, 2009 | comments: 20

aratma d. May 5, 2009, 8:08am EDT

Gorgeous imagery

The Surreal Circus Short Fiction - 'Come with Me' by Siddartha Pierce

Mar 29, 2009 | comments: 9

aratma d. May 5, 2009, 7:58am EDT

oh my, something to chew on :) great stuff!

Muse of the weekend #10 by aratma d.

Apr 27, 2009 | comments: 1

aratma d. Apr 27, 2009, 9:45am EDT

Let me know if there is a way to improve the translation ... I used Google Translate and addapted according to the little knowledge I have of spanish

Enjoy!

Like you by aratma d.

Apr 23, 2009 | comments: 3

aratma d. Apr 24, 2009, 11:28am EDT

Thanks, Elsie

This has much of truth and the same amount of imagination in it.
It was a word play going through my mind that I've made the effort of capturing. If I don't write it down, I don't find it ever again.

Places#17: Study by The Clown !!!

Apr 17, 2009 | comments: 7

aratma d. Apr 23, 2009, 9:14am EDT

I'm reading backwards, can't help that I like numbers going in an orderly fashion ... but thanks for the idea for the next time I read the series.

Exquisite write, btw. I'm starting to think in the same rythym. Just to match the find of the day :)

Places#22: Bridge by The Clown !!!

Apr 23, 2009 | comments: 8

aratma d. Apr 23, 2009, 8:30am EDT

Spooky, mr. clown

Loved the writer's block idea. Never realised l could kill some character to get out of it.

Your poems always turn on themselves, transforming perpetually. I think you're a poem, too. Or that the poem is you.

Falling for her - Dancing fingers week 11 by Sheila Deeth

Feb 13, 2009 | comments: 11

aratma d. Mar 18, 2009, 4:16am EDT

Unexpected ending :) ouch!
A bit short, though ... the ending, that is. If you meant to make the shock last well after finishing the reading, then you nailed it.

GCC - Wish Upon a Star by Sakuragirl S.

Feb 27, 2009 | comments: 9

aratma d. Mar 5, 2009, 7:36am EST

i'm thinking about phoenix birds here...
great draft!

Muse of the weekend #9 by aratma d.

Jan 19, 2009 | comments: 3

aratma d. Jan 21, 2009, 7:36am EST

But we should always keep an open mind about it.

Thanks for stopping by, Elsie.

Another sky - Nifty Fifty #8 by aratma d.

Jan 19, 2009 | comments: 6

aratma d. Jan 20, 2009, 3:03am EST

Katherine, I'm glad for that too. Got a stone off my heart.

Clown, you just gave new dimensions to the idea. I'll take the opportunity and give you a big kiss because you write so incredibly. *giggles*

Ann, for this one the idea came from when I was a little one looking down from my umbrella. And of course, the prompt from Nifty Fifty was the trigger for it.

Thanks for stopping by :)

September to June - Dancing Fingers #10 challenge by Sheila Deeth

Jan 8, 2009 | comments: 16

aratma d. Jan 12, 2009, 10:20am EST

simply beautiful

Morning Rhyme #32 by Sakuragirl S.

Dec 18, 2008 | comments: 6

aratma d. Jan 5, 2009, 9:58am EST

Great stuff!

My fav part:
You love until you don't
You try until you can't
You laugh until you cry
You cry until you laugh

The monster by aratma d.

Dec 8, 2008 | comments: 9

aratma d. Dec 9, 2008, 9:14am EST

Thanks for all your kind words. Made some changes, let me know if they help.

@Ann: Good point and thanks for the link :)
@Boris: Im afraid I'm far from the complexity of your work and dreams ;) But I certainly do not mind the company. So, see you in the purple maze?

Forsaken - Chapter 1 (version 2) by Sakuragirl S.

Dec 4, 2008 | comments: 15

aratma d. Dec 4, 2008, 7:00am EST

you sure know how to make someone curious ... next, please!

A Sight of Walking Tiptoed by The Clown !!!

Aug 20, 2008 | comments: 6

aratma d. Dec 3, 2008, 9:39am EST

I'm in awe ... and in need to re-read and see what more I can find.
The feeling I am left with is the constant try to make sense where there is no need to search for it.

Dancing Fingers - Week #9 - Prompt by Sakuragirl S.

Dec 3, 2008 | comments: 11

aratma d. Dec 3, 2008, 9:31am EST

Gorgeous song. I can think of a story or two for this one.

Burning - Dancing Fingers #6 - non-challenge by aratma d.

Oct 30, 2008 | comments: 18

aratma d. Nov 24, 2008, 12:07pm EST

I seem to not manage to see it ... the rhythym in this that is ... I guess it's the "curse of the writer" ... I can't see the mistakes either. Vodoo, anyone?

Free Noveling Software by Sakuragirl S.

Nov 21, 2008 | comments: 18

aratma d. Nov 21, 2008, 4:20am EST

It's a good one ... still haven't used all of the tools in it ... guess i'm not much organized with my stories yet

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