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First Poetry Please Collaborative Renga by Tracey W.

Mar 3, 2008 | comments: 68

K.L.B Da'Vir Mar 3, 2008, 7:15pm EST

Im Back from Break!!...SIGN ME UP lol

Stand Up Comic by casey d.

Feb 23, 2008 | comments: 1

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 23, 2008, 8:48pm EST

I think its originality and personality. I am a big fan of stand-up comedy and the one trait the most successful comics have is the ability to talk to the crowd instead of talk at the crowd. Meaning the make the crowd feel like their friends listening to a story. You have to understand the crowd. The actual joke could be lame as hell but if you get the crowd to love you they'll laugh regardless. Or there are those people who are just extra energetic and the consistency of their enthusiasm just puts the crowd in good smiling mood making laughing easy. Its all about crowd control and being a good people person

A Photo by Toni V.

Feb 19, 2008 | comments: 44

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 21, 2008, 12:51am EST

It looks like an infrared of Jupiter's Great Red Spot

Help Us By Making Calls to Upcoming States! by Barack Obama

Feb 17, 2008 | comments: 17

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 19, 2008, 10:34am EST

GO BARACK!!!

River of Days by Kathy W.

Feb 16, 2008 | comments: 33

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 16, 2008, 6:26pm EST

I really enjoyed this and the structure helped the flow

Greater Things than These by 0000-synchro-0000

Feb 8, 2008 | comments: 9

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 15, 2008, 4:26pm EST

Good poem

Mixed Marriage (or Ode to a Morning Person) by Corinna Parr

Feb 9, 2008 | comments: 19

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 15, 2008, 4:20pm EST

I love this...so short yet with so much depth just as in waking up next to that person and those few instants of their sleeping eyelids staring at you

New Sensation by James Ciriaco

Feb 11, 2008 | comments: 20

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 15, 2008, 4:09pm EST

wow...ive always wondered what makes today's established poets so established. Everything has become so buisness minded the art is lost within the paperwork and paychecks. As long as you say there is still hope I will continue with the dream...thanks for this

Forced Labor by Tom C.

Feb 10, 2008 | comments: 29

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 15, 2008, 3:59pm EST

This is good...good and hilarious. The story aspect entertains the reader until the message sets in and sends you home with a mouth full of rocks

The Gather Guide Program by Pam Johnston

Feb 13, 2008 | comments: 129

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 13, 2008, 5:22pm EST

whomp whomp

Sky Gazing (Villanelle) by DragonSoul !.

Feb 6, 2008 | comments: 14

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 9, 2008, 1:40am EST

Ooo i love villanelles. I enjoyed your imagery and depth. I find myself constantly gazing into the night sky. Falling into constellations and star clusters. Wondering...

On Re-reading Tao Te Ching by Tom C.

Feb 3, 2008 | comments: 28

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 9, 2008, 1:36am EST

The poetry is great I will have to familiarize myself with Tao and then come back. I love a chance to learn something new

Taken (cinquain) by Kate Keeley

Feb 7, 2008 | comments: 36

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 9, 2008, 1:31am EST

Im always finding myself starring at the stars...orion seems to keep my attention

Nalita Media:__Discovering **The Root** by ~Lady Neeetah of California~Obama #44 W.

Feb 7, 2008 | comments: 65

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 9, 2008, 1:00am EST

Thanks Miss Lady

Short Story First Line Challenge - Sentence 34 by Mary Beth Magee

Feb 2, 2008 | comments: 9

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 3, 2008, 10:46pm EST

I cannot access the group to join, it says it is private. Can you please send me a group invite. Thanks

WEAVE the Relationship...Poetry Please by Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom'

Feb 2, 2008 | comments: 61

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 3, 2008, 2:31pm EST

I have read this seven times and still cant decide on the meaning. I read it, look at the picture and cannot get past the imagery and intimacy of the poem. Good Job! Congrats

Woven-- 1 Feb 08 by Neal Wass

Feb 1, 2008 | comments: 30

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 3, 2008, 2:22pm EST

I agree with Tom's interpretation. I also like "by all the hands that

touch me" it makes me think of not only the people we interact with but the experiences of life that mold someone into the person they are today

Nalita Media>>*Watergate* in the NFL???? Huh? by ~Lady Neeetah of California~Obama #44 W.

Feb 1, 2008 | comments: 35

K.L.B Da'Vir Feb 2, 2008, 7:58pm EST

This is the last thing the Senate needs to be using its time on...I mean for real we are going to use the judicial system and the congress of the United states to investigate the cheating tactics in sports...come on. Has anyone stopped to wonder why the NFL destroyed the tapes so fast, not the patriots but the NFL. One because its not that big of a cheating issue. The problem with looking at a coaches mouth for potential plays has long been a problem thats why every time you see them on tv the have the playsheet covering their lips. But another reason why they destroyed it is because america blows up so fast when a story of potential cheating comes out...cough cough the mitchell report cough cough. Every sport has its cheaters. Whenever you have the potential to make millions of dollars in a billion dollar industry you will have people who will try and cut corners. Lets just drink some cold ones, lose some money, and be entertained...

O yeah...GO PATRIOTS...UNDEFEATED BABY!!! lol

One Liners.. Too gud they are..Think about them :) by Gagandeep Singh P.

Jan 21, 2008 | comments: 4

K.L.B Da'Vir Jan 31, 2008, 10:17pm EST

These are funny

Tapestry - Poetry Please Single Word Challenge by Anita R.

Jan 30, 2008 | comments: 10

K.L.B Da'Vir Jan 31, 2008, 9:13pm EST

Our realization of existence...Good one

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