Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng)'s Comments
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Dec 11, 2009 | comments: 7
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Dec 11, 2009, 3:46pm EST
thanks for the comments. I was half asleep when i wrote it so i didn;t catch alot of it. thanks for noticing :D lol
Oct 27, 2009 | comments: 8
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Oct 28, 2009, 7:03am EDT
Thank for all your comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it !
Oct 27, 2009 | comments: 8
in reply to a comment by Ed Da Head Toker
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Oct 28, 2009, 7:02am EDT
Thanks for the comment and i'm glad u think so. A lot of my heart went into it which is something i am rarely able to do. i appreciate the comment
Aug 8, 2009 | comments: 2
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Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Oct 27, 2009, 8:22am EDT
thank you, kind of unsure what i meant for the most part because i was intoxicated when i wrote this "summary" (if you want to call it that lol) but i think i might be able to make something out of it...i hope haha thank you for you comment!
Oct 19, 2009 | comments: 9
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Oct 20, 2009, 6:58am EDT
Thanks for the comments! Would love to hear your input. Any suggestions or ideas would be welcome :D
Oct 18, 2009 | comments: 3
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Oct 19, 2009, 7:03am EDT
Thanxf or the comments. IT's the start of one that i'm going to finish tonight (at least the first draft) and post here in a couple hours.

With the exposed ankle thing. I meant to attribute that to his being in a rush, wearing shorts and not putting much thought into the excursion into the woods. I noticed that too when i was reading over it and will fix it after i get the rest of the story down and start on the final draft.

I wrote another first draft and it ended up being nowhere near as good as the one i wrote last night (this post). Glad you enjoyed and will hopefully have the fnished product (first draft) up here in a few hours :D
Jul 29, 2008 | comments: 4
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Oct 18, 2009, 9:08pm EDT
They were amazing, hadonlyheard one song oftheirs at the time and i have completely fallen in love with their music, Rufus Wainwright is also an amazing preformer. very talented
Jul 23, 2008 | comments: 48
in reply to a comment by Xinwen Z.
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Aug 14, 2009, 7:23am EDT
Good for you, No one should have to. thanx for the comment :D Peace, Love, Equality!
Jul 23, 2008 | comments: 48
in reply to a comment by Lisa Narciso
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Aug 14, 2009, 7:22am EDT
i read this comment and i have no idea why i didn't comment :D thanx for pointing it out to me Xinwen. I completely agree. Def. a preference but on the most basic level, as Lisa said, like our taste buds. I"ve always been attracted to the same sex and can't remember a time when i wasn't. it's purely genetic and i thank you so much for the comment. Peace, Love, Equality!
Jul 4, 2009 | comments: 8
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Jul 4, 2009, 3:00am EDT

Power to the people. i can see clearly and i see right past this cencorship bullshit. Freedom of speech and Freedom of expression are the building blocks of society! don't let them comtrol you. Gret pic gaylynn
Jul 3, 2009 | comments: 12
in reply to a comment by Len Maxwell
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Jul 3, 2009, 6:57pm EDT

i read read your comment Len and i'm sending this in for a competition for Esquire Magazine.
Jul 3, 2009 | comments: 12
in reply to a comment by Paula C.
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Jul 3, 2009, 5:49pm EDT

No paula this is not a true story. This is pure fiction thought up solely by the title i was given as a prompt. It is a bit morbid and that is my style. i hope you enjoyed reading it.
Jul 3, 2009 | comments: 12
in reply to a comment by Len Maxwell
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Jul 3, 2009, 4:38pm EDT

I am really excited to hear what he has to say about my story and can't believe his offer. It's so great to have someone  willing to read my story and help me work it out and fine tune the details. There really are good people here on gather :D
Jul 3, 2009 | comments: 12
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Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Jul 3, 2009, 4:36pm EDT

I was working on the story around five in the morning and i noticed that too when i re-read it today. I went through and changed some of them but i'm sure i missed more than i changed lol. Thank you for your help in re-working the story, i really appreciate the input. Fresh eyes are an amazing thing.
Jul 3, 2009 | comments: 12
in reply to a comment by A. F. Stewart
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Jul 3, 2009, 3:17pm EDT

I'm going back through and doing more editing to the story but i don't think i'll be adding dialogue. I'm trying to tell the story through a person from the towns point of view and no one really knows what went on inside the building, only what they can piece together from what was said. I only have 4,000 words to work with and i want to put as much detail as possible into the piece. thank you for your suggestions and i appreciate them greatly. peace and love
Jun 29, 2009 | comments: 68
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Jun 30, 2009, 11:23pm EDT

I can't believe this woman is at it again. I just might have to send her another e-mail (which, like my last one, probably won't get a response)
Jun 29, 2009 | comments: 2
Jeremy Senters{P0eT!c_Re@zon!ng) Jun 30, 2009, 11:18pm EDT

Very well said and i totally agree. I am proud of being gay but gay pride i something that is a tad much for my taste. it is who i am and it is nothing more than that. I don't need to have a parade to validate who i am. I think the posters were a decent idea but it's still taking it a little bit too far for my taste.
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