Rabbit Hole

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Deloris Wright Aug 21, 2009, 2:34pm EDT

I think you should come out of your rabbit hole. and face the world again. We have all been hurt. and have bounced back.

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 2:49pm EDT

Thank you Deloris, I am working on it. I write about it for two reasons (1.) to help clease my soul and (2.) I hope others can get something out of what I write, something that may help them also.

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Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Aug 21, 2009, 2:36pm EDT

I think everyone has a rabbit hole that they go to once in awhile until they are ready to pop out and face their world again.

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 2:52pm EDT

I feel you are right Sadie. There are times in life that we need to be introspective. We need to reevaluate things happening in our lives. We need to see the truth of the matter.

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Holly C. Aug 21, 2009, 2:39pm EDT

I hope that when you feel able to come out of the rabbit hole that you will emerge as a stronger and happier person.

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 2:54pm EDT

Thank you so much Holly! You are a beautiful person.

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Dawn (fly on the wall) Aug 21, 2009, 2:41pm EDT

I'm naturally paranoid so I would keep the door closed

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 2:56pm EDT

Dawn, there are many types of doors. There are the physical doors and the metphorical doors. There are times when you open your door to someone and then later are not sure you should have.

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Howard b. Aug 21, 2009, 3:50pm EDT

In this crazy world of ours we have to take the chance. Or else we lose. Just short trips .Small steps . But we have to try. Life can be rough . But alone it can be worse. Come out of that rabbit hole . You will see the sun shines. Bright skys with pretty clouds. Make the day what you will. Because it is you that makes the day.The world may treat you bad. But I feel there is a brighter tomarrow. You never know unless you try.

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 9:07pm EDT

Thank you Howard! It is not me in the rabbit hole. Thank you so much for your kind words though, they are much appreciated.

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Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. Aug 21, 2009, 4:22pm EDT

you hold YOUR future in your hands~
thoughtful poem~

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 5:41pm EDT

Thank you desee! Right now its a day to day thing. It will work out as it should.

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Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. Aug 21, 2009, 4:23pm EDT

Thanks for posting to GutterGirls~

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Maurice K. Aug 21, 2009, 5:13pm EDT

Very contemplative poem. I have faith in you to do the right thing for yourself.

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 5:37pm EDT

Thank you Moishe!

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Melissa Underhill Aug 21, 2009, 5:19pm EDT

Opening the door is hard. -hugs-

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 5:24pm EDT

You are right Melissa, closing the door if you need to is possibly harder.

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Peter Joseph Swanson Aug 21, 2009, 5:32pm EDT

That was really cool. Love the theme. Well said !!!

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 9:03pm EDT

Thank you Peter!

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Michelle S. Aug 21, 2009, 5:41pm EDT

very well said. we do all need to climb in the hole once in awhile to reflect. it's much quieter in there.
all the best in your quest for answers. :)

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 9:04pm EDT

Thank you Michelle! I edited. It is not me in the rabbit hole.

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Gary (aka: William Pinn) J. Aug 21, 2009, 7:17pm EDT

Oh wabbit...Hewo.....Come out, come out wheheveh you ahhh...hahahaha....

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 9:04pm EDT

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Gary (aka: William Pinn) J. Aug 22, 2009, 1:12pm EDT

Think Elmer Fudd/Bugs Bunny.

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Bard Constantine Aug 21, 2009, 7:44pm EDT

Lovely expressions of uncertainty and hesitation. You know when the time is right, and you can again feel and breeze and taste the morning dew...

Chana M. Aug 21, 2009, 9:05pm EDT

Dear Bard, you words are quite wise. Thank you!

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Jean, just the teensiest bit odd, F. Aug 21, 2009, 8:27pm EDT

I do some of my best work when I write from that "dark place", too... ;o)

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Georgiana S. Aug 21, 2009, 9:55pm EDT

Turn that rabbit hole into an entire rabbit warren!
(I have decorated my rabbit hole, it is comfy! LOL)

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Linda T. Aug 21, 2009, 11:24pm EDT

Sometimes something happens in our lives to make us doubt our own instincts. It is hard to have faith in yourself again. It is hard to trust that your not making an error in judgment. That trust will return but it may take some time.

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Adrian Eve Revenaugh Aug 22, 2009, 12:07am EDT

Remember the film Wait Until Dark? (nods to Wiki). Your spooky poem reminded me of the haunting dreams brought on by this classic movie.

A well written Rabbit Hole Chana.

The Surreal Circus

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Loretta E. Aug 22, 2009, 11:13am EDT

Very thought provoking, great Chana!

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Korak 257 Aug 23, 2009, 8:13am EDT

hi,
Some writers say they are inspired by the heart..broken or soaring...I really do not know.But if one feels solice in the Hole...go for it. I believe that a manic depressive would make a great writer of poery...lol...Our heart breaks and finding ourself alone so we write !
The only bad thing is we may find ourself not so trusting with age creeping up from behind....and poof ! We are alone in life.......but think of all the writing one could accomplish in there life ....

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necee t. Aug 23, 2009, 2:01pm EDT

hello dear Chana... this is very well written... you are always with me in my heart...
wishing you all the best in your quest... love and hugs... Bless you...

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Sharon P. Aug 23, 2009, 2:08pm EDT

There are times when we see only the beast. Other times, only the beauty. Yet life has both.

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