by Lewis (taking over Gather) K.
Member since:
February 27, 2007

You Knew (twc- past)

March 04, 2007 09:22 PM EST (Updated: August 24, 2008 10:52 PM EDT)
views: 57 | comments: 26

You knew I didn't love you

You knew I didn't care

You knew that I would walk away

And never would be there

You knew my heart was frozen

You knew I was so cold

You knew that when the chips were down

I'd drop my cards and fold

All these things you knew and still

You gave to me your heart

Even though you knew that I

Would tear it all apart

You knew that when you walked away

I'd fall in love with you

Thus my world comes tumbling down

Because of what you knew

 

2007 Lewis Knight

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Comments: 26

*LORA* M. Mar 4, 2007, 11:23pm EST
well written nice flow
Kathryn E. Mar 5, 2007, 3:44am EST
Excellent!
J. C. Mar 5, 2007, 11:26am EST
Very well done.
Jessica B. Mar 8, 2007, 2:27pm EST
Nice.
nadya k. May 9, 2007, 6:07am EDT
very well done.
Otelia S. May 9, 2007, 4:26pm EDT
Oh well, you knew!
samantha b. May 9, 2007, 6:38pm EDT
These poems of yours are so intensely emotional that I tend to catch my breath jus a little each time that I read another one. Thanks for sharing your very well written art!
Cynthia Isis A. Aug 25, 2008, 2:07am EDT
Oh Dear.. you are like a man I know so well... and it is all the same story...

What is the reason for this Lewis? or.. shall I speak to he who speaks in your poem.. it may not be you!

In fact people often think what I write is me when in reality I am observing.. but then I understand too..so I am there I suppose.

How this hits home. I am the one who walked away...

I would love to understand this better but in the end.. I will not say more... write me privately and I will speak to you if you wish. I have said too much now.

I like you Lewis!

Bright Blessings,
Isis
Cynthia Isis A. Aug 25, 2008, 2:07am EDT
Oh like the poem too!

Peace,
Isis
Cynthia Isis A. Aug 25, 2008, 2:08am EDT
Obviously you hit the target here!

again more peace,
Isis
Terry Collett Aug 25, 2008, 2:20am EDT
Darn good poem.
Beverly P. Aug 25, 2008, 2:23am EDT
Excellent! Thanks for sharing.
Dan H. Aug 25, 2008, 8:24am EDT
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Pamela O. Aug 25, 2008, 10:53am EDT
That was stunning! Glad you brought it back for more attention :-) I would not have gotten to read it otherwise!
Kushal Poddar Aug 25, 2008, 11:31am EDT
beautifully expressed
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Aug 25, 2008, 11:32am EDT
very nice
Elmo A. Aug 25, 2008, 4:03pm EDT
a lesson learned too late - rings an unhappy bell for me
Angela A. Aug 25, 2008, 4:06pm EDT
Did you really? Did you really? Who ever knows for sure?
Lovely poem.
amy s. Aug 25, 2008, 9:40pm EDT
Congratulations on your win
Shelbia C. Aug 27, 2008, 1:33pm EDT
Good one, very well done.
Sharon B. Aug 30, 2008, 6:36pm EDT
wonderful job
Cindy A. Sep 4, 2008, 8:10am EDT
beautiful poem, touching, understandable...sometimes walking away is the only thing to do...i love your work.
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Sep 5, 2008, 9:10am EDT
Wow ! I am thrilled to read and the

comments too are all expressively true !!!
Maria Gilman-Nairne Sep 5, 2008, 8:32pm EDT
Wow! That's all I can say: WOW!
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Dawn (purple fly on the wall) Aug 18, 2009, 3:29am EDT
Oh my, that was wonderful! I loved that way too many times. I guess it's saying that it's better to have than...well, you know the rest =)

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