interesting the flickering sense you achieve between the subject of this poem and the way/words you use in writing it. you get at your subject on multiple levels that way... cool.
Thank you, Wrick. This was the hardest of the 4 snippets I wrote for the challenge. I had to edit out about 10 words and still keep the poetry. I am glad you were here to read it!
Michelle ~ This is a perfect "29" FAIRY'S~in~SHADOW~Style Snippet, and has been entered as your 4th entry in Our 2nd Snippets CHALLENGE on the topic of SHADOWS.
Very different ~ TEN!
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So you noticed? je je Like I wrote to Wrick, I had to edit out about 10 words. But, I wanted a snippet with a lighter tone, a fantasy style so to speak .. .. I hope I achieved it!
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Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Very different ~ TEN!
This is currently FEATURED on the Front Page of Snippets! ~ "Where WE WRITE in "30" words or less, and delete the rest."
Thank you for all YOU do, René!
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