Money can't buy everything by Jayden W
Money can't buy a non sick life
Sadness is a way through life
Learning you do by yourself
Responsibility doesn't go on a shelf
Abraham Lincoln is a piece of history
You can't buy a forest of dogwood trees
Wish Poem by Jayden W
I wish I had enough money to find a cure for the ill
If that doesn't work I will give money to the poor so they won't feel a chill
If war happens I will tell the President to stop it
If I could I would make everyone fit
(One note: I asked him if he meant fit like healthy or fit like room enough for everyone on the planet and he told me "both")
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he's a keeper!
Thanks for sharing.
Wow!! He's very talented!
awww so terrific!
nice :) and sweet
Wow, what a great kid! He is really thinking.
I think he did great!
For some reason I really like "Responsibility doesn't go on a shelf" I don't know if he meant it that way but i think that could be really deep
Your son is wiser than his years. I really liked the "Responsibility doesn't go on a shelf".
smart young man.
points nation
He did a great job on these too. I'm sorry if you have said this before but how old is he?
He is 8. Finishing up 3rd grade
He did a wonderful job!
thanks for sharing...
What an amazingly smart kid!
I'm zooming by through,
Nice poem, he's a sweet heart
nicely done!
Points Nation
Wow, how impressive! He might just have talent as a poet or writing books since he has a way with expressing his feelings and qualities that are important to him.
you can tell he was raised proper!
POINTS NATION!
Teriffic!!!!! I think you have a writer on your hands.
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Very nice poems
Very nicely done!
Good aspirations all, guess he's who I sung to when I sang these words a few years ago! - "I'd love to change the world...........but I don't know what to do. So I leave it up to you." Our future can only get more interesting, the youth does seem to have a fire, good on him!
PN
Awww! I like. PIF
nice poem
great work
I love when children spoke from the heart.
This child has some deep thoughts for his age. Wonderful. Points nation.
Wow this young man is insightful and kind. We need more leaders like him. He seems much older than his age! Very impressed! PIF
i am also very impressed with his insight into things......it's wonderful pif
Great job and such a thoughtful, deep-thinker! ~pif~
He is sooo" Adorable !! Precious Writing !! :-)
PIF
I really like both of these poems. He did a very good job! HH
has his heart in the right place
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Isn't is wonderful when they start writing young? HH
I just wanted to stop a minute and thank everyone for your kind words!