Hmmm... a poem

Wasting away

Shame of today

Overlooking all reason

Change of the season

Internal torment

Maybe heaven sent

Path leading nowhere

Almost too much to bare

Knowing it's wrong

Lesson in a song

But feeling so right

Cool breeze, warm night

Loving touch

Butterflies and such

Demand is great

Inanimate state

Look into my eyes

Holding surprise

Heart like a stone

Standing alone

Whispering within

Thriving off sin

Never-ending strife...

Welcome to life

Comments: 6

Ginny H. Jul 17, 2008, 8:24pm EDT

Here is "A 10 For You!"

Infinity M. Jul 18, 2008, 7:10am EDT

excellent piece - you should submit your poetry to helium (www.helium.com).

Infinity M. Jul 18, 2008, 7:11am EDT

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Shelbia C. Aug 7, 2008, 5:01am EDT

Nicely done.