by Patricia A.
Member since:
July 4, 2008

This Place

July 17, 2008 07:30 PM EDT
views: 29 | rating: 10/10 (12 votes) | comments: 9

I seem to be falling

Further and further in

           This place is empty.

I look around yet

Nothing is familiar here

          This place is unknown.

I feel as though my soul

Has disappeared within

          This place is dark.

I think time has stopped

Completely within me

          This place is lonely.

I believe this is the final

State of resting

          This place is cold.

I know my body and my mind

Are now extinct

          This place is hell.

 

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Comments: 9

Ginny H. Jul 17, 2008, 7:40pm EDT
Here is "A 10 For You!"
Patricia A. Jul 17, 2008, 8:17pm EDT
No, not today.
Anne W. Jul 17, 2008, 8:32pm EDT
Well written!
Infinity M. Jul 18, 2008, 7:14am EDT
Whoa - I think you need a quick vitamin B shot - or a fast triple espresso (not to make light of your work - just wouldn't want to think that u were depressed) otherwise this is a captivating piece
Dan H. Jul 18, 2008, 5:06pm EDT
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