what lies beneath
Permafrost reveals; she, on this Sunday morning
over a marmalade on toast, sheds her pelt.
The pelt is brilliant with spots of pink care
and white peace on a blue dream backdrop. Beauty.
This Sunday a fishmonger tells me about
his folks, his hut near a pond. Don’t forget
the loan sharks, promoters pursuing him hard
for lands. All these are standing erect over
a base of love ticking like a rhythmic watch
or a series of habits that never die.
And in the same Sunday morning which is spread
like the marmalade, she sheds her pelt, showing frost.
I cling to the brightness of her fur even
after she’s gone, tranquilly telling me that
love has eloped with time long before this day.
© 2009-Copyright reserved Kushal Poddar (reprinting is prohibited without permission)
one with a gutter-girl
: I am just a gutter girl
She says indifferently.
Autumn is flowing down
the stream of the gutter.
Soon a proper fall will clog
the channels, dead leaves will rot.
I can smell freedom on her
as our walk ends abruptly
but our conversation roams
through the afternoon’s faint streets.
© 2009-Copyright reserved Kushal Poddar (reprinting is prohibited without permission)
snippet
Love falls in a pond;
just her luck.
Just her luck
that a frog turns out
to be someone else.
© 2009-Copyright reserved Kushal Poddar (reprinting is prohibited without permission)


Comments: 95
me o' my!
These are brilliant!!!! Especially the last one. But I like the second one too.... the thought of leaves falling in Autumn is a beautiful thought, until they clog the storm drain...... leaving everything to pile up in the gutter. Perfect.
But the last one..... the frog that turns out to be someone else..... it is all luck, isn't it? Is it luck that makes us gutter girls? I think so.
Kushal, you are an honorary member of gutter girls, as is Ed..... I don't think any other men are a member, are they? Crap, don't make me go look. lol
I especially loved the second one, but I also love the dark, first one....
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All that really hits the gutter are her outer wear of dead leaves.
Great poems Kushal.
Poem 2: You've perfectly captured a heroine I've seen in any number of movies, including La Femme Nikita.
Thank you for posting to The Surreal Circus.
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
"love has eloped with time long before this day"
M
"what lies beneath" is an AWESOME poetic piece ~ I really love the way this piece rolls in flow. WELL DONE Poddar!