evening sings on the last ferry
The yellow lights flicker on the waves,
an addition to the evening,
an addition to the river’s tide.
Count the changes, the day’s earning. Sweats
follow the silence, fall on the deck.
Last ferry shall depart in a while,
congested, briny, smelling and wet.
The yellow lights flicker on the waves;
a silent man looks up and listens
to the beggar singing; evening.
Just nod to acknowledge a friend
greeting you; silence flickers amid
a singing voice and returning birds.
The moments lose balance; the boat departs.
© 2009-Copyright reserved Kushal Poddar (reprinting is absolutely prohibited, without permission)
October walks and flights
October sky pleads; a solitary
petition before an emperor;
it beseeches, “come out for a sigh.”
A path trots onwards. A walk to shop.
Something unusual, you seek
but there is nothing; hence you walk back;
more walk under the sky. Let’s fly
over those contours of lanes, man-made
homes and hearths, those shifting youths waiting
with a flower or a knife, those fires
burning leaves of fall or even lives, fallen.
October sky searches for answers
that are, in sooth, enveloped within.
=© 2009-Copyright reserved Kushal Poddar (reprinting is absolutely prohibited, without permission)


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October walks and flights...I couldn't help but gaze at the sky through my window here and wonder, ask, a question or two...I'll await the answers, which will come in due time I s'pose. Thanks for the pondering moment.
I read your coloring poetry. It is brilliant.
Second poem... a nice surreal vision; love the metaphors of October pleading and searching, which makes me think autumn is made for deep thought for us to carry as we fly...
Excellent writing, my friend....
This poem really touched me. October is a special month for me. My entire life I felt like I was searching for something and never finding it. I believed I found it in the form of alcohol. It was ten years ago on October 17th that the true answers came to me and I have been sober ever since.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
I use Ferries too
Commute the Parramatta
to the Sydney CBD
Ferry in the Morning
cool morning light
Home in the evening
lights in the night
October flight of fancy Fall
75 views and only three rates
I guess I'll make it four
who will vote if not your mates?
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
"Chaos reigns within.
Reflect, repent, and reboot
Order will return"
After Kaspersky begins its reign
my computer cannot let the broadband be working.
Now I am at a Library and soon be going.
http://strangeplaces.net/weirdthings/haiku.html
has been online on standby all day
A virus has entered Trojan at the gate
Control Alt Delete won't make it go away
It's an Antivirus extortion attempt
the virus is not real but the adware is
Restart in safe mode, networking exempt
Rollback to Friday works like a Whiz!
Master of the sky. Do you long to take to the air yourself? And would that be a joy or a terror?
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
Poddaresque is so perfect.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
The yellow lights flicker on the waves;
a silent man looks up and listens
to the beggar singing; evening.
Beautiful!
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
find the sunshine
feel the rain
let mother nature
shine again
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
the crows came back today as it's warm
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
Featured in the Triple Name Club.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
The smoke of October, whether fallen leaves or lives. A moody, seasonal pale makes itself felt the planet over this time of the year. Equinox - the equalizer of the big gears before the loss or gain of light.
Your duets are increasingly fine.
I saw Slumdog Millionaire again last night so these images are easy to envision!
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
I hope your computer problems have been resolved. My surgery has been cancelled. Too much risk for a problem I don't really feel is worth it! Yay!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
It is from a Library I am now sending this message.
I am mad right now because of my computer problem and I may not be in touch till the day after tomorrow.
wait a minute...wish already came true ;D
Featured at Grass Roots Writing
with many thanks Kushal
Mark
I like them both but Evening Sings on the Last Ferry is my favorite, Kushal.
I love your use of yellow light, the ambience of the whole poem, especially the last line.
The second poem is quite dynamic and seems totally objective in saying it is difficult to understand why such different paths are taken.
soliloquy and sunset