New Year’s Eve surprise
Gracie McKenna sipped her tropical Margarita. The yellow umbrella practically poked her lip, as she contemplated the office New Year’s party. Streamers filled the room, drinks made their rounds, everyone mingled, having a grand old time. Everyone except her.
Frankly, she had grown tired of the same old office politics. Bradford sucked up to Pete, the General Manager, while Sheryl showed off her assets to any warm blooded male who showed her attention.
Her bleached blond hair, big boobs, and fake tan, along with her sultry baby blue eyes got her whatever she wished. From numerous vacations on the company’s expense account, to chemical peels and Botox. Sheryl poisoned everyone she came into contact with, including Gracie, herself.
If it hadn’t been for her boss, Evan Pierce, Gracie would have thrown in the towel long ago, and resigned.
Gracie sighed, meandering over to the copier, pretending to push the buttons. Evan Pierce had always been a true friend. From college to her very first apartment, and subsequent break up between her and her boyfriend Steve, last year, he had been there for her.
Despite Sheryl’s manipulations, Gracie still had a job. But, of course that was water under the bridge. Or was it?
A tap on her shoulder, brought Gracie out of her contemplation. Glancing over her shoulder, she saw the one person that would always make her heart clench in desperation and despair. Why hadn’t she realized how she had felt before now?
“Evan.”
His mouth kicked up in that one sided grin of his. His brown polo shirt fit him like a second skin. Evan’s tan blazer had two buttons, the bottom one fastened, and he had his sleeves rolled up to his elbows.
As her eyes traveled further, she noticed he still wore his black suit paints with black patent leather, wing tipped shoes. It was as if he never liked to change. He always wore the same drab colors. In that they were opposite.
“Gracie. I see you decided to come after all.”
As Gracie had assessed him, Evan took the opportunity to look his fill. She had quite changed from the awkward lady he first met in college. From frumpy sweat shirts to the tight fitting clothes she wore today. With her multi colored blouse, with ruffles on the neck, her usual navy blue blazers tucked close to her breasts. The only noticeable sight of daring on her monochromatic, A-line skirt was the long slit on her right thigh. And of course, there were her red stiletto heels that showed off her calves to perfection.
Gracie shrugged. “I found that I had nothing else to do.”
Evan laughed, shaking his shoulders. He had always had the gregarious kind of chuckle that shook his 6 foot 2 muscular frame. And, sometimes, when she went home at night, her fantasies would go into overdrive. Not that she would admit that to him.
“You are a riot this evening. And, here I was going to invite Steven to come by instead.”
Her shoulders stiffened. “Well, maybe you should have.”
His eyes turned soft, as he rubbed his palm along her arm. “I’m sorry Gracie. I was only kidding.”
She hated when he did that. Being all apologetic and sexy. God, she hated that she thought, that she could be one of those women. One that drooled over their boss, and never could face them the next day in the board room.
Most of all, she hated that she brought up Steven’s name. He knew that they had a nasty break up last year. And, that she had already broken one of the cardinal rules: Never date a co-worker. Well, she would never do it again, as long as she lived.
“Evan, what brings you along this way?”
“I just wanted to see how you were holding up. I know that this past year has been slightly tough on you. It had been rather difficult, deciding who would go.”
“That was my fault, and no one else. I never should have put you in that position to begin with. I dated someone at work and I got burned. I’m sorry, I had to make you choose. It was unfair, not to mention unprofessional.”
“Don’t you dare beat yourself up for that. We both had no idea how far Steven would go. He crossed the line. In the end, I made the best decision. You are a very hard worker Gracie. And, the top Sales Vice President. Your deal over last year, made us practically millionaires. If I had to choose all over again, I would choose you to stay in a heart beat.”
“But, what about what Sheryl said?”
“Don’t mind her, Gracie. She’s unimportant to me. I know her type. And, I don’t fall for her tricks. If she doesn’t clean up her act soon, I will have no choice but to let her go.”
“So, you know?”
“Who doesn’t? If it weren’t for Paul, and his slick politics…
Well, she would have been gone a lot sooner. But, I had no proof of anything illegal, so she stayed.”
“But, you have proof now?” Gracie inquired, brow raised.
“Not exactly. But, I hope to.”
Gracie watched as Evan rubbed the back of his neck. Every time he did that, his muscles stretched and bunched. And, her mouth went dry. His black hair combined with his emerald green eyes always put shivers down her spine.
Blast it! Why couldn’t she stop thinking of him?
Evan watched as Gracie worried her bottom lip. That plump mouth of hers, seemed to be doing strange things to him this evening. Every time she spoke, he had to grit his teeth to hold back the true things he wished to say to her.
He had known how much Steven had hurt and misled her. And, how she wished to steer clear of office romances. That had been why he hadn’t revealed any of his secret desires.
Instead he had to suffer while he saw her strut around in the office, bending over to file paperwork, or grinding coffee beans which oddly did permanent damage to his Jockey shorts. Now, he had to stare at her mouth, her inviting chocolate brown eyes, and try hard not to grab her and take her to the nearest desk.
Gracie swallowed, sensing the new tension behind his eyes. The place seemed to be getting way too hot. And, she had to get out of there.
“Excuse me. I need a drink!”
Evan shook his head as he watched her scramble away from him. Would this evening of torture never end?
Gather Writing Essentials, Wednesday. Short story for your enjoyment. Part 2, hopefully coming soon.


Comments: 55
Featured in Gather Writing Essentials, Wednesday
:)
Happy New Year.
Thanks Priscilla for coming by. If you wish to critique, that's fine with me.
No, thank you Maria.
Thanks Elizabeth. I'm glad I could make a story where you'd come back and see the next part in the series.
Thanks Linda.
I decided early on, that switching POV's is the way, I wished this story done. I want the audience to know that they both want each other. And, are both too afraid to admit to it. But, what happens later, will be a shock. Thus, the surprise, in the title.
With his sports coat, and his sleeves rolled up.. That;s a very good point, Sarah, how could she see that? I will rewrite it to where, she will think that since he always wears his sleeves rolled up, whether in the office or not, she will assume that he's doing so now.
Thanks for pointing that out.
Thanks Sally, dear.
Thanks Georgiana, I'm glad to hear that.
Good tidings for 2009
Thanks Mary. I'm glad everyone has something positive to say thus far.
<h2>Happy New Year Comment Graphics</h2>Comments & Glitter Graphics for Myspace, Hi5, Orkut, Friendster
Thanks Larry. What can I say, I'm a comma momma.
Thanks Necee.
:
Computations of life
This also proves that my assumption on your last piece was correct; that you wrote it in a hurry. I knew you could write like this. Kudos.
I just wanted to say I am finally going through what is now under 7,100 pieces of gather new mail that is in my inbox on here. So with that in mind I have finally come to a piece of mail that was addressed to me in regards this article submission you have created to share with the gather community. Thank you for taking the time and sharing your piece with us here at gather. :o)
And as well Merry Christmas... and Happy Holidays... as well as I hope you have a Happy New Year... in 2009 :o)
I appreciate it very much.
Thanks Erica, I will try to get the next part done soon. When I can.
I was basically writing description for me. And, will flesh out the story more later, when I have the time.
And, romance is not all about action, especially in the first chapter. But, the second will definitely have more people, and more things being done...
And, I don't know what you mean by making more use of the dialogue.
If I had a more specific example, I might know what you mean.
I never begrudge anyone giving me critique.
That's why I'm here on Gather so others can tell me where my weaknesses are so I can fix them. So, I appreciate your comment, William.
Thanks Marianne very much. I had not even noticed that typo even after checking the piece twice.
Thanks Shelbia, that means a lot coming from you.
Oh, hi Charlie! Thanks.
Thanks Nancy, you're sweet.
Thanks Maria for the comment and the friend request.