a story turned into a poetry

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Danielle P. May 30, 2008, 9:11am EDT

very nice

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KC Klein May 30, 2008, 9:23am EDT

wonderfully done!

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Granny Janny H. May 30, 2008, 9:28am EDT

You weave a very fine web with your words allowing your readers to project images on the screens of our minds.

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Shirley U Understand Me S. May 30, 2008, 9:49am EDT

very serious..

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JoAnne D. May 30, 2008, 10:03am EDT

It certainly took a good turn and produced a very nice piece. Thanks for the share.

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Ernie (Author of DESTINY OF THE DIVAS) Johnson May 30, 2008, 10:17am EDT

This is a nice poem Poddar but this is not what we do in Poetry Play On Words.

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*LORA* M. May 30, 2008, 10:36am EDT

cool. I like it

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Larry P. May 30, 2008, 11:59am EDT

There are no absolutes . Do it anyway you want to .

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Haim Kadman May 30, 2008, 12:02pm EDT

So to be caught in a spider might be lucky. I liked it Poddar.

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Ashley P. May 30, 2008, 1:29pm EDT

Quite a journey indeed. Well written.

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Karen F. May 30, 2008, 2:34pm EDT

Great...loved it.

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Amy H. May 30, 2008, 2:37pm EDT

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Carlos P. May 30, 2008, 5:12pm EDT

Great write...I liked it.

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Alison H. May 30, 2008, 5:20pm EDT

Here you juxtapose a loaded encounter and death, and a morgue and a garden in spring, with a web to hold it all...it feels darkly foreboding. Well-drawn and the phrasing just flows.

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Deloris Wright May 30, 2008, 5:51pm EDT

This is will written Poddar thank you

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Sharon P. May 30, 2008, 7:19pm EDT

Nice poem

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(Jasper,(Disciple for Christ. w. May 30, 2008, 9:00pm EDT

Good poem Poddar.

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Angela A. May 30, 2008, 10:05pm EDT

Wonderful poem. It speaks to the heart of all of us.

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Rae M. May 30, 2008, 11:33pm EDT

Very good. Thank you!

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René Allen May 30, 2008, 11:35pm EDT

Poddar ~ You know I love this. For the sake of the Dream Depths Group, could you please tell the members if this Poem, or any of your other poetics that you bring to the Group ~ come to you in a DREAM?

It would help us in our connection of Dreams and Poetics.

Of course, I realize that this is in other Groups as well, so please indulge us on this one.

Blessings ~
Your Friend,
Rene

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Austin Cushing May 31, 2008, 1:37am EDT

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Carl Prime Time Lee May 31, 2008, 10:22am EDT

Thank you for using Gather Broadcast where there is an open line of communication for all and you're more than just a connection.

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Carl Prime Time Lee May 31, 2008, 10:24am EDT

BTW, I liked your poem.

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Dawn S. May 31, 2008, 11:48am EDT

well done

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Melissa M. May 31, 2008, 3:24pm EDT

very nice!!

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Jan S. May 31, 2008, 7:16pm EDT

Cool!

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Rosa A. Jun 1, 2008, 12:32am EDT

Nice

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David F. Jun 1, 2008, 9:01am EDT

I really love this.

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Sharon B. Jun 1, 2008, 6:09pm EDT

nice

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Ernesto Pangilinan Santiago Jun 2, 2008, 12:16pm EDT

Dear Poet,

My congratulations! "a story turned into a poetry" is currently featured on The Sound Of Poetry Review through Sunday, June 08, 2008. Please, keep submitting your poetry. Many thanks, the TSOPR Editor.

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