by amy s.

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March 9, 2007

Sacrifice word promt : Scarifice

May 21, 2008 06:40 PM EDT

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Jesus

Scarificable

giving up one's life for us

teacher, rabi, master, servant

watches flock night and day

watcher over darkness

sheppard

this is another fun poem to do with kids. It is called the diamond poem.

first and bottom line are nouns

second line is an adjective for the first noun and the fourth line is an adjective for the bottom line

the third and the 5th line are verbs that describe the nouns

the fourth line is what do they have in common

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Comments: 10

Karen F. May 21, 2008, 6:42pm EDT

Really neat...good subject and meaning

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Alison Pearce May 21, 2008, 7:07pm EDT

Great piece!

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Dianna R. May 21, 2008, 8:28pm EDT

Different! I like it.

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Richie Montalbo May 21, 2008, 8:34pm EDT

nice form..

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amy s. May 22, 2008, 3:45pm EDT

thanks everyone I think it was the an awesome way to get kids to write

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Barbra L. May 22, 2008, 4:52pm EDT

Amy, this is a good way to help children learn the different parts of speech. I love the content of your write! Beautiful!!!

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Tracey W. May 25, 2008, 10:12am EDT

Amy this is a very good poem. But did you mean to say "sacrificeable"? I love your line teacher, rabi, master, servant in the middle. Very well done Amy.

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Sheila Deeth May 25, 2008, 3:24pm EDT

Neat.

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~*~Danyale~*~ N. Jun 30, 2008, 10:09pm EDT

cool

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Wanda H. Jun 30, 2008, 11:43pm EDT

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