A sweet breeze touches the face, plays with locks,
The car moves with the light and shadow of night.
The torn blanket drawn over by side street
The breeze becomes amazed with life's tactics.
The rat with two lights of hunger searches
Your left-over. The car wild with night moves.
Moves the world. The end of the night remains
Down-faced in a stream of a dark gutter.
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A night ride by Poddar
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A Perfect "10" INTRO . . .
A sweet breeze touches the face and plays with locks.
PART I ~ A night ride by Poddar
Snippets Poetics Style ~ A perfect "30"
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Car moves with light and shadow of night.
A torn blanket turn down side street ~
Breeze becomes amazed with life's tactics.
Rat with two lights of hunger searches
Your left-over.
PART II ~ A night ride by Poddar
Snippets Poetics Style ~ A perfect "30"
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The car wild with night moves ~
Steers, then veers, and yet moves the world.
Still the end of the night remains
Down-faced in a stream of an endless dark gutter.
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