Faces of death

a well writen poem but a little strange and scary Poddar. I hope this is just a poem and not your thoughts.

Really good and really different.

chilling and different, very effective

this is very good. the subject matter is interesting and the perspective is new to me. well done.

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This is very dark, Poddar. Though you wrote it that the sun felt suicidal...

I had to attend the funeral of a daughter of some friends who committed suicide. It was a terrible thing to endure.

However, I can understand the pain of unending depression. If that's where you are.....please seek psychological or spiritual help.

Or, it may be that you are putting yourself in the mind of someone, some sun who is thinking these thoughts.

a great portrait, my friend

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I find the poem well written, but at the same time very sad that anyone would out this much thought into suicide. Life is worth living. No matter where anyone is in life, if they just stop, look around and see. I mean really see, they can find away out of the funk that has them wanting to die. Remember all of you, there is nothing you can not face with the help of God, family, and friends. Just look at the sky, see the beauty as the sun sets, or rises on a new day. Watch the stars dance in the night and get lost in those beauties. Listen to the laugh of children, see the lovers walking hand in hand. No matter what the problem, you can always find hope to live.

As long as you are live there is a chance for you to come out of the darkness and in to the light, out of saddness, and into joy. If you kill yourself, you have elminated any chances that pain will ever go away. For with out pain, one can not truely experience joy.

Utterly engulfing.

As stated by others, darkness can be all enveloping, but there is light. If necessary please seek it out, there are people available to help wherever you are located. I speak from a place where I know from others the devastation, there is hope!

Great imagery. The ending line was perfect. It was bittersweet. I'm sorry my sentences are short and choppy, but my thoughts are more inside your poem than my opinions!

i don't think of this as a suicide note of any sort. on the contrary, for me it means face death as you face every setting of the sun..and don't forget the moon and fireflies..

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This poem is dark. But tells a story. Of someone that contemplates suicide on the sunset.
Thinks of life before taking it. But in the end His early thoughts win. Great poem. Loved reading it.

wow, that's deep... i know this feeling... Bless you...

As always your way of expression is what makes it different and ringing !!!