by amy r.

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Another Poem - Suffer Tomorrow

October 14, 2009 04:17 PM EDT

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Her body is filled with ease,

false excesses run through her tainted blood.

He will is strained, her power drained.

Inside she cries. Her head is heavy,

her barren eyes dim.

Her eyes can admire only him.

What can fulfill my pain and deepen my sorrows?

Love him today, suffer tomorrow!

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Comments: 21

K K. Oct 14, 2009, 4:19pm EDT

good poem.... Typo line 3

amy r. Oct 14, 2009, 4:23pm EDT

OOPs, oh well, whatever lol!

K K. Oct 14, 2009, 5:18pm EDT

it is an easy one to change he to her >:-)

amy r. Oct 14, 2009, 6:49pm EDT

Not in my case, but perhaps in yours lol, but no doubt...

K K. Oct 14, 2009, 11:36pm EDT

He will is strained,? -- Her will is strained.?

amy r. Oct 15, 2009, 1:45am EDT

Do you know who "she" is?

K K. Oct 15, 2009, 2:29am EDT

On your 3 line you have "He will is strained" do you mean the "He will" of the woman? The testosterone?

Or maybe I just don't understand what a "He Will" is.

I thought it was meant to be "Her will is strained, her power drained"

amy r. Oct 15, 2009, 2:36am EDT

Dude, typo, you called it.

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Angela A. Oct 14, 2009, 4:47pm EDT

I'm really inspired by this.
My story, Tortured Soul about the vampire..
Needs this phrase, "Tainted blood"
I hope you don't mind if I borrow it.

amy r. Oct 14, 2009, 6:49pm EDT

Not at all, I'm flattered that you dug it!

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dreama e. Oct 14, 2009, 5:12pm EDT

thank you :)

amy r. Oct 14, 2009, 6:49pm EDT

Your welcome.

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Sidewinder 7 Oct 14, 2009, 5:18pm EDT

Great word organization.

amy r. Oct 14, 2009, 6:49pm EDT

Thank you.

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Johnice R. Oct 14, 2009, 7:06pm EDT

"Love him today, suffer tomorrow!"

Well, we have all been there, and loved.

amy r. Oct 14, 2009, 8:51pm EDT

No doubt :(

Johnice R. Oct 15, 2009, 8:35am EDT

:)

Ruthi C. Oct 15, 2009, 7:43pm EDT

Ditto!

amy r. Oct 15, 2009, 8:13pm EDT

Why thank you Ms. Ruthie.

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Ed Da Head Toker Oct 15, 2009, 9:34pm EDT

a nice read

amy r. Oct 15, 2009, 9:48pm EDT

Thanks very much for reading ;)

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