by Noble Chinwendu
Member since:
May 15, 2009

Sensitive

September 03, 2009 04:05 PM EDT (Updated: November 04, 2009 02:52 PM EST)
views: 64 | comments: 10

Like a touch within senses I own

It poked in its vibe

And its sensation elevated

My innermost grudge

Built with lifeless spontaneity.


I sought for ways to reach out or not

I did, and it hurts I know

Its spontaneous, "m sensitive

 

There are spaces to find

You blindly ceased to see

There are actions to hide

The blames could be on me


We"ve crossed hearts for so long

You should have known,

I"m sensitive.

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Comments: 10

A. F. Stewart Sep 6, 2009, 10:31am EDT
Wonderful expression.
Dawn (kitty on the wall) Sep 9, 2009, 6:45pm EDT
yes, wonderful. we all are a little sensitive in some way I believe
René Allen Sep 16, 2009, 6:46pm EDT
This is BEAUTIFUL Noble.

Feel free to share this with us in Artistic Minds®.

Blessings ~
Rene
Noble Chinwendu Sep 20, 2009, 3:51pm EDT
Tanks to u for d coments, jst joined d clique.
Angela K .. Sep 21, 2009, 7:05pm EDT
beautiful,deep, I like...
So true, beautiful and sadness radiates through this.

Marilyn
Noble Chinwendu Sep 28, 2009, 4:33pm EDT
When ur heart do not know u like should. it does hurt.
Ann M. (Site Scryer) Sep 30, 2009, 11:30am EDT
A good evocation of words touching our hidden (and perhaps unknown) triggers.

Thank you for posting to The Surreal Circus.
Angela A. Sep 30, 2009, 3:22pm EDT
We all have our sensitivities. We need to see it and move on.
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Abiodun Ehindero Oct 13, 2009, 3:24pm EDT
I amsensitive too; not a little but sometimes VERY!

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