Sometimes the difficulty in reading a poem that is this short and this good is that there is little to say after having read it.
Mainly because the whole thing is so well-crafted that the whole piece would have to be highlighted. There is no one line or stanza to point at and say "this is the cou de gras" The whole poem is that. Well written.
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Oooooooooo !!!
Short and sweet and to the point.
You write poetry very well
Very nice.
You are very articulate too
Because he's handsome? Te he!
Seriously, lovely poem dear friend!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
vivid...and painful.
Sometimes the difficulty in reading a poem that is this short and this good is that there is little to say after having read it.
Mainly because the whole thing is so well-crafted that the whole piece would have to be highlighted. There is no one line or stanza to point at and say "this is the cou de gras" The whole poem is that. Well written.
right to the point!
Very nice, it's short but it says it all. Thank you for posting it.
thanks for sharing your poem
t y--good work
The last line makes this poem scecial.
feeling like a Sunday: a triolet
I hate to tell ya, Cheryl - I don't know either. I like the words, but I do not understand them. I'm missing something altogether here.
Sure, the last line - says it all, but what does it mean? I'm clueless:).
Hi Rose...:) It means that the person she is talking to in the poem is totally clueless as to what she is going through...:)
to reach the ultimate goal
total surrender is expected
A dedicated love poem in that direction
kudos
Cheryl - your writing is excellent
profound. i luv it!
wonderful!
There are some of your poems I really enjoy over and over. This is one of them!