by Cheryl W.
Member since:
December 10, 2005

Clueless

April 06, 2009 08:43 PM EDT (Updated: April 06, 2009 08:49 PM EDT)
views: 78 | comments: 31

He waits for me,

flipping channels with the remote,

counting cobwebs in corners,

looking at pictures

of women he wishes

I could be...

when the truth is

he has no idea

who I am...

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Comments: 31

Beth G. Apr 6, 2009, 8:44pm EDT
I know very much how this goes Cheryl. Great job!
sarah g. Apr 6, 2009, 8:45pm EDT
great poem Cheryl.
Stacey *Mamasaid* D. Apr 6, 2009, 8:49pm EDT
Sounds just like my ex. Great write!
EDWINA (MISSIE) B. Apr 6, 2009, 9:12pm EDT
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Suzanne White Apr 6, 2009, 9:14pm EDT
Well Written!
Holly K. Apr 6, 2009, 9:23pm EDT
Great poem!
phil w. Apr 6, 2009, 9:26pm EDT
Well done.
Beverly P. Apr 6, 2009, 9:32pm EDT
Wow! Very intense and filled with emotion in so few words. Excellent.
Nora Davenport Apr 6, 2009, 9:34pm EDT
Very beautiful poem!
Bard Constantine Apr 6, 2009, 10:20pm EDT
Words sigh with forlorn sadness. Few things are worse than being unappreciated....
Eric Cabot Steed Apr 6, 2009, 10:36pm EDT
" More ... The only thing I can say at this point, is more ...
Larry H. Apr 6, 2009, 10:54pm EDT
thanks for sharing..
Kushal Poddar Apr 6, 2009, 11:24pm EDT
Well done.
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another story of waiting
Stephanie S. Apr 6, 2009, 11:38pm EDT
very nice
Jan S. Apr 7, 2009, 12:31am EDT
Wow. This one hits close. Well done.
Howard b. Apr 7, 2009, 12:55am EDT
I'm a guy and can understand this. Very well put. So sorry life can be this way.
GayLynn P. Apr 7, 2009, 1:24am EDT
Sad and true for many people.
Kimber F. Apr 7, 2009, 2:14am EDT
I've been there before and glad to be out of it. Thanks for sharing and peace.
gina h. Apr 7, 2009, 3:19am EDT
NICE. I like it.
Nancy Biri Apr 7, 2009, 5:28am EDT
nice
Sue T. Apr 7, 2009, 8:20am EDT
Excellent work, Cheryl, you say so much in so few words!
Rachel W. Apr 7, 2009, 11:24am EDT
And there's the reason my ex is my ex
A Parameswaran N. Apr 7, 2009, 1:15pm EDT
truth, well said!
Lisa Frost Apr 7, 2009, 1:37pm EDT
This is well said. I have lived this life once and refuse to live it ever again.
Angela A. Apr 7, 2009, 2:56pm EDT
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Shelbia C. Apr 7, 2009, 3:12pm EDT
I really like this
Lewis (taking over Gather) K. Apr 7, 2009, 10:54pm EDT
So much said in so few words. You truly deliver the feelings of frustration and pain. Powerful writing.
Cheryl B. Apr 9, 2009, 9:14pm EDT
How sad that is for him. For he knows not what a special gift he has.
roger s. Apr 13, 2009, 12:18am EDT
great poem
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Apr 21, 2009, 9:22pm EDT
great poem

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