by Kushal Poddar

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January 19, 2008

BEDROOM

May 15, 2008 11:08 AM EDT

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Bedroom

The world has sent him early to his bed

The doors kept ajar partly disclose truths..

A world apart, ages apart, half known.

The night of difference that will crawl in

His dreamscapes shall live till he understands.

The bed grows short, time endless and night birds

Rise to the juncture of a blue moon.

He grasps the panes of window of a pain.

Night smiles to indulge in delights of world.

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Comments: 12

Alison H. May 15, 2008, 11:21am EDT

I see a child trying to decipher a world with all its mysteries and tragedies. You certainly haven't forgotten what it feels like to be a child, Poddar. I love how you illustrate the passage of time:

"The bed grows short, time endless and night birds

Rise to the juncture of a blue moon."

Most excellent!

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Granny Janny H. May 15, 2008, 11:23am EDT

Subconscious dream of a playful poem
Pleases the morning reflection of night

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David W. May 15, 2008, 11:23am EDT

A very nice analogy.

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Cheryl W. May 15, 2008, 11:28am EDT

Very vivid emotion and imagery here, Poddar. Well done!

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FRED R. May 15, 2008, 11:51am EDT

ami bujh-te pere-cHi.

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FRED R. May 15, 2008, 11:52am EDT

tHik acHe.

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Amy H. May 15, 2008, 12:14pm EDT

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Kimberly Ripley May 15, 2008, 1:10pm EDT

Beautifully written and very thought provoking.

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Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. May 15, 2008, 2:08pm EDT

Nice written..thanks for sharing.

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KC Klein May 16, 2008, 3:13am EDT

love the word 'dreamscape'

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samantha b. Jun 6, 2008, 9:43am EDT

i can see a little kid in this poem, very good indeed

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