Aftermath of an accident
The down and drawn men, how was it to be
That close to death? The snub of light through it,
The bitter dark water's fatal embrace
Tightening right to the end. Sheer wastage.
The salt that eyes let mingle with the creek.
How the desperate cries of you, choked the
Anger treasured in minds or desire
Of hopes, premature even to their hearts.
The cold beds of a morgue and the hubbub
And aftermath on the accident did they
Care even iota of it? Their eyes
Frozen in terror never answered questions.
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The bitter dark water's fatal embrace
Tightening right to the end. Sheer wastage.
The salt that eyes let mingle with the creek.
How the desperate cries of you, choked the
Anger treasured in minds or desire
Of hopes, premature even to their hearts.
It sounds like a horrible accident.
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Rene
Aftermath of an accident
by Poddar
Down-drawn men . . .
close to death?
Bitter dark water's fatal embrace
Tightening -- the end.
Cold beds ~ morgue ~ hubbub
aftermath accident ~
Did they care one iota?
Eyes frozen in terror ~ unanswered questions.
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Blessings to you Poddar!
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