by Jade C.
Member since:
January 21, 2008

game: poem builder

April 05, 2008 06:53 PM EDT
views: 50 | comments: 11

okay, the way this works is  I'll write a line or two to begin a poem. then someone comments with the next line. the person after that will create the next line by building off of the one thaat was posted before them. lets get going!!

 

twinkle twinkle little star,

just outside these iron bars.

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Comments: 11

Leah A. May 3, 2008, 4:10am EDT
Far away the world awaits
Leah A. May 3, 2008, 4:11am EDT
Around the bend and through the gates
JoAnne D. Jun 1, 2008, 9:33am EDT
Up above our world so bright
JoAnne D. Jun 1, 2008, 9:33am EDT
Like a diamond in the night.
Rebecca C. Jun 1, 2008, 10:17am EDT
Sweet surrender of my heart so dear,
Jade C. Jun 1, 2008, 11:20am EDT
far away he feels my fear
And if my sigh becomes too loud,
Kelly M. Jun 1, 2008, 2:53pm EDT
Just be sure to cover your ears
Moysant G. Jun 3, 2008, 2:46am EDT
Our love in turn becomes a shroud
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Jun 6, 2008, 5:26pm EDT
Thanks for sharing.
Austin Cushing Jun 10, 2008, 12:27am EDT
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