by Carrie Marie P.

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July 14, 2008

Short Piece of my Heart

November 03, 2009 05:00 PM EST

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Hues of yellow, pink and red

Made up the little bed

Come back to me little one

Your life had only just begun

Now floating high amongst the atmosphere

Almost as if you were right here

Tags: poem, poetry, children, memories, life, blogging

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Comments: 16

Patrick Madrigal Nov 3, 2009, 5:02pm EST

Short and to the point I like it :)

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Joanne Vicente Nov 3, 2009, 5:07pm EST

Lovely!
PIF

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Stacey (Jesus is coming soon! ) U. Nov 3, 2009, 6:26pm EST

Awww.....*sniff*

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Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Nov 3, 2009, 6:31pm EST

Really nice!! :D

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Franklin Newman Nov 3, 2009, 8:53pm EST

How sad, and yet, how lovely.

Franklin Newman Nov 3, 2009, 8:54pm EST

Almost a touch of Dickenson.

Carrie Marie P. Nov 5, 2009, 12:57am EST

funny you would say that; I can hardly read her work w/o feeling really sad.

Franklin Newman Nov 5, 2009, 1:35am EST

Actually, sadness often reminds me of her work.

Carrie Marie P. Nov 5, 2009, 4:25pm EST

Could you imagine what her pieces would be like today if the doctors forced antidepressants down her throat?

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Mary G. Nov 4, 2009, 4:03am EST

very good

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DIANE D. Nov 4, 2009, 7:19am EST

Very good.~

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Love from Darlene! Nov 4, 2009, 4:57pm EST

I enjoy reading your poems.

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melvin dumar Nov 6, 2009, 8:23pm EST

I miss you

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Elizabeth R. Nov 8, 2009, 2:52am EST

Beautiful, Carrie Marie.

PIF

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shelly R Nov 9, 2009, 2:54pm EST

Beautiful....sad, touching. Thanks for sharing. PIF

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Stacey (Jesus is coming soon! ) U. Nov 13, 2009, 8:37pm EST

Stopping by from paying it forward. :.(

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