by Jennifer R.
Member since:
January 12, 2007

Braid Of Love

February 07, 2009 08:00 AM EST (Updated: February 07, 2009 08:03 AM EST)
views: 80 | comments: 28

My Strand

Your Strand

Twisting to our destiny

Upside down hearts traveling towards the earth

 

Bound together through the light and the dark

Complementing and melding our coarseness together

 

We are a braid of Love

Wound together to face

The perils, the glory, and the moon

Together as one until our last season
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Comments: 28

Kathryn E. Feb 7, 2009, 8:24am EST
This is lovely, Jennifer.
Jennifer R. Feb 7, 2009, 8:29am EST
Thank you Kathryn.
Jennifer R. Feb 7, 2009, 8:29am EST
Thanks Rick.
Nancy Biri Feb 7, 2009, 8:40am EST
Nice poem
Adina P. Feb 7, 2009, 8:47am EST
delightful , joyous words braided so beautiful ! I love it :)
Beth G. Feb 7, 2009, 9:03am EST
This was lovely, thanks for sharing Jennifer!
Lexa Daily Feb 7, 2009, 9:55am EST
Nice metaphor for the harmonizing of two hearts. Good imagery.
Dorothy H. Feb 7, 2009, 9:56am EST
Very nice! 10 for you!
Vicky P. Feb 7, 2009, 10:08am EST
Never thought of braids that way, very lovely.
Svetlana Goryacheva Feb 7, 2009, 11:23am EST
Lovely poem! ;-)

Blessings and best wishes - S.
Sharon B. Feb 7, 2009, 2:50pm EST
wonderful
Thank you, for sharing

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Have a Great & powerful day W/J!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! /a>
gorgeous braiding of love~
theresa s. Feb 8, 2009, 4:47pm EST
thanks for sharing
Georgiana S. Feb 8, 2009, 8:19pm EST
Very nice, I saw the strand of DNA as I read it!
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 9, 2009, 7:33pm EST
Braid of love...I love this,Jennifer and how beautifully you managed it...wow!
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 9, 2009, 7:33pm EST
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Shannon H. Feb 10, 2009, 1:11am EST
Very pretty poem, Jennifer B.
Vinay Benjamin Feb 10, 2009, 6:08am EST
Jennifer I agree with all the compliments already posted - "We are a braid of Love" is an enchanting line.
regina k. Feb 15, 2009, 2:07am EST
wonderful
peggy g. Feb 19, 2009, 12:14am EST
nice poem
René Allen Feb 28, 2009, 12:48pm EST
This is BEAUTIFUL Jennifer!

I gave you a BIG "10" on this, and it is also FEATURED in Artistic Minds®

HUGS ~
Rene
Jennifer Lee Feb 28, 2009, 1:00pm EST
Wonderfully penned and resonating. I love the way you express your love with such surreal imagery and excellence.
Sharon P. Feb 28, 2009, 2:06pm EST
Very nice.
elizabeth e. Mar 1, 2009, 7:06pm EST
What a great metaphor, Jenn....I will never look at a braid again without think of this poem.
"My Strand

Your Strand

Twisting to our destiny"
Wonderful poem

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