MY AUNT

You were only 6 when i was born

We grew up like sisters

Instead of aunt and niece

You put up with a lot from me

Always wonting to tag along

For the most part you let me

Then we grew up

Had our own lives and families

I moved to another state

And we lost touch, grew apart

But we recently found each other again

So sisters, aunt and niece again

Together we will stay, for no one to tear apart again

For a special aunt that i love dearly

I DONT REALLY WRITE POETRY DONT KNOW MUCH ABOUT MY AUNTS DO

THIS IS MY FIRST TRY

Comments: 34

Beverly P. Sep 13, 2008, 12:16am EDT

Wonderful
Great Job!

Glitter Graphics

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Visionaerie B. Sep 13, 2008, 12:19am EDT

Very nice! I am so lucky to have my aunt still alive -- she lives only a few blocks away and Mom telephones her quite often. (My other aunt died of pancreatic cancer several years ago). Mom was also blessed to discover her own half-sister (who lives in the Quad Cities) a number of years ago, so they stay in touch very well too. Thanks for sharing this!

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Amber M. Sep 13, 2008, 12:28am EDT

Great Poem

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Monica H. Sep 13, 2008, 12:32am EDT

I think it's beautiful.

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Rae M. Sep 13, 2008, 4:49am EDT

Very sweet!

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Penny M. Sep 13, 2008, 9:40am EDT

Thanks for posting to Endless Points

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Anne W. Sep 13, 2008, 11:02am EDT

Great!

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Anne W. Sep 13, 2008, 11:02am EDT

Thank you for posting to Point Whore! Wishing everyone many, many points!

Sorry I have been MIA, but I will not be around much this month :(

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Vic Needs Coffee Sep 13, 2008, 12:03pm EDT

Very nice.

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Shirl T. Sep 13, 2008, 8:04pm EDT

THANKS EVERYONE SHE LIVES ABOUT 2 AND A HALF HOURS FROM ME BUT WE KEEP IN TOUCH

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Dan H. Sep 14, 2008, 2:57pm EDT

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Diane "stormyz" B. Dec 5, 2008, 11:38pm EST

Here's a 10 for you!! Thank you for posting this to the Gimme 10!!! Group

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Elizabeth S. Dec 19, 2008, 3:46pm EST

I had an uncle 2 1/2 years older than I was. I wish we'd been close like you and your aunt.

My mother has a niece about 6 years younger than she is. They've stayed close for over 70 years now. Hope you do, too.

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