scar

Indeed, she does all that, and more.

Thanks for posting this to Short Story and More!

Wow, that is powerful imagery...

but not sure I understand the ending...she obliterates the reader, or is obliterated herself?

Excellent poem!

Very good, the physical connecting with the emotional.

Domestic Abuse captured in poetry. A different twist from the norm Poddar, but silent thoughts always rise to the surface of society.

And if this was not the intention of the Poetic Piece, it is certainly speaking out to my spirit that way.

The words . . . the words in this Poetic Piece strike hard, strike fast, and expose truth --

"bloodless

Blood on hand..."

Words to describe the murders done through violence without blood. All the same, it is still murder -- murder of a soul -- murder of a spirit -- murder of innocence. . . .

And it is indeed, "A flaw down a valley of Human soul." as you've relayed.

And . . . "the land of violent

Dark conducts." ~ cycles of abuse -- which are. . .

"The teeth of animal past" ~ (animalistic actions) -- but are they PAST?

(which is indeed a demonic act but forth as a demon call)

. . . "And wait till

She obliterates beyond

Memories". . . .

puts forth the QUESTION -- "WHY WAIT" -- Why not INTERVENE?

EXCELLENT POETIC WORK PODDAR!

This poetic piece is a deep well of many thoughts.

Awaiting your next Poetic Piece.

Blessings ~
Rene A.

Very powerful

Excellent poem!

A very special strong poem, leading right into the fabric of the body and the soul, it seems. I'm glad you love to write.

This is the first time I am reading your poem and found it a stunner. I am sure your muse is as attractive as your Poem.

This poem hit home for a lot of people I am sure.

thank you all.

Good job

excellent poem
love it