by Kushal Poddar
Member since:
January 19, 2008

i am keeping it simple

February 17, 2008 03:18 AM EST (Updated: February 17, 2008 03:20 AM EST)
views: 58 | comments: 9

  simple

 

Look at your arms

And, at your prey.

"It is worthy of troubles."-

Can you now say?
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Comments: 9

Emma L. Feb 17, 2008, 3:21am EST
Another great one.
KC Klein Feb 17, 2008, 4:18am EST
Nicely done, Poddar
René Allen Feb 17, 2008, 5:12am EST
Every poem you write is wonderful in my book, Poddar. You are a poetic blessing.

Keep on with your Master Poetry, and never get discouraged. I am always excited about reading each one of your Poems. (simply put) ~ lol

Much Love,
Rene A.
Duvessah (going by my nickname now) V. Feb 17, 2008, 6:08am EST
nice
flit . Feb 17, 2008, 2:06pm EST
very concise and to the point :)
*Holly *. Feb 18, 2008, 12:00am EST
Beautifully Done.
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Feb 18, 2008, 9:46am EST
Aother one fromm the dreamer ?! ?! ?!
Tom C. Feb 18, 2008, 11:30am EST
If only passion could always be displaced so easily. Very nice, Poddar, a gem within 4 lines.
Carole S. Feb 18, 2008, 5:53pm EST
To the point.....and the point of view....well....wow

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