by DragonSoul !.
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January 11, 2007

Too Early

February 05, 2008 06:58 AM EST
views: 63 | rating: 10/10 (9 votes) | comments: 15

Too Early

Morning
Time to wake up
Shower and head to work
Another day of toil awaits
Mourning

Copyright © February 5, 2008

~DragonSoul

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~Poet's Nook

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Comments: 15

Jill D. Feb 5, 2008, 7:03am EST
Succinct! My poor hubby could have written this...
Chasity S. Feb 5, 2008, 7:51am EST
I feel you!! Though I don't have to head off to work being a stay at home mom, but some mornings are just rough to get going regardless!!
flit . Feb 5, 2008, 8:00am EST
love it.... perfect use of the two mornings :)
Marianne M. Feb 5, 2008, 8:20am EST
Enjoyed your play on words, DragonSoul! And yes, it's hard getting started in the morning. Can't remember the last time I jumped out of bed, ready to face the day.
Wade A. Feb 5, 2008, 8:32am EST
Honing your cinquain skills Dragonsoul? Nice work!
Edward Nudelman Feb 5, 2008, 9:29am EST
great play on words, though the metaphor is nothing to 'play' around with (as you express)... and often our mornings can really resemble a wake. Great terse capture of this idea!
Jim Ross Feb 5, 2008, 9:50am EST
"Too Early", displays the daily tragic humor of unwanted waking, perfectly, DragonSoul. My personal reaction to your great cinquain was a universal, groan! Good work!
Audrey F. Feb 5, 2008, 10:01am EST
Concise and to the point. Your cinquain definitely hit me where it counts. Ouch! Excellent job, DragonSoul.
Alison H. Feb 5, 2008, 10:56am EST
That is a good one......
vijay kumar Feb 5, 2008, 10:04pm EST
Another day of toil ... And you convey it very well. Wonderful play on words. Good work.Enjoyed reading it.
Sheila Deeth Feb 5, 2008, 10:48pm EST
Ooh. Nice play there.
Tom C. Feb 6, 2008, 10:19pm EST
Nice wordplay, Dragonsoul. I like a cinquain or rictameter that can do this. Sounds like you need a vacation...or a new job. :-)
Austin Cushing Feb 7, 2008, 7:38pm EST
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penni d. Feb 8, 2008, 11:22am EST
mourning the time spent in mundania, awaiting the day of release, of freedom.... :)
Elsie Duggan May 7, 2008, 2:45am EDT
feels like that some days dosen't it,

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