by DragonSoul !.
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January 11, 2007

Proposal (Lune)

February 03, 2008 05:11 AM EST
views: 98 | rating: 10/10 (8 votes) | comments: 10

Proposal

Band of yellow gold
A diamond
I ask for your hand

Copyright © February 3, 2008

~DragonSoul

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~Poet's Nook

 

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Comments: 10

elizabeth e. Feb 3, 2008, 7:04am EST
Simple and to the point.
flit . Feb 3, 2008, 8:00am EST
very nice ...but it needs an answer/response too, I think :)
Marianne M. Feb 3, 2008, 10:37am EST
Enjoyed your poem, DS. I like the simplicity. The LUNE is another interesting poetic form I've never tried. I'm glad I own a copy of Padgett's "Handbook of Poetic Forms" to keep up!
Apryl Just Apryl Feb 3, 2008, 12:50pm EST
Beautiful!!
Audrey F. Feb 5, 2008, 10:03am EST
Lovely, DragonSoul.
Did you really? Ask "her" to marry you????
Sheila Deeth Feb 5, 2008, 10:49pm EST
Not heard of this sort. Lovely poem.
Gigi K. Feb 6, 2008, 10:11am EST
Wonderful! I'm going to look into this form as I've never tried it. You captured a whole scene so perfectly in just a few words.
Gigi K. Feb 6, 2008, 10:13am EST
Just looked up this form and found it's similar to haiku. Will definitely give this a try because haiku is one of my favorite forms.
Awwww, hope she says yes.

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