Promises
Broken before
You meant to keep your word
Hidden in illusion and hope
Silent
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Kate Keeley
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March 4, 2007 Promises Unspoken (cinquain)
January 20, 2008 02:23 PM EST
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Promises Broken before You meant to keep your word Hidden in illusion and hope Silent
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Comments: 17
That is so powerful a phrase. Well done.
I'm going to read more of your stuff.
peace
CINQUAIN ~
In about 1909, Adelaide Crapsy developed these short, unrhymed poems consisting of five lines and twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2. Related to but not copied from Japanese literary styles.
I'll have to try it!!!