by Georgiana S.
Member since:
September 14, 2007

The Flick Of A Switch (epilogue to Poddar's poem)

April 16, 2009 11:03 PM EDT
views: 66 | comments: 16

Poddar wrote "Identify This Darkroom" and my comments evoked a challenge to me to write the epilogue.

here it is Poddar!

 

Trapped within a memory brought to the forefront of his mind

By a fading collection of lights and shadows

Depicting a moment he lost by simply not

Paying attention the first time around.

The depression of the button

That captures this moment

Forever to be reflected upon~or not~

To try to regain the feeling of that

First experience frozen in time

It freezes his heart along with it

And depression of the button leads to

Depression ever more.

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Comments: 16

Leigh Featherstone Apr 16, 2009, 11:12pm EDT
Wow this meant a lot to someone.... Nice poem. I got a lot feelings from it.

Thanks for posting.
Jo N. Apr 16, 2009, 11:15pm EDT
Very nice, thanks for sharing.
Angela A. Apr 16, 2009, 11:35pm EDT
So much can happen when you turn on your creative side.
Lovely poem!

Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Solskin Iam Apr 16, 2009, 11:55pm EDT
are you reading my heart? wonderful......
Holly K. Apr 16, 2009, 11:56pm EDT
Wonderful! Emotion is strongly felt.
EDWINA (MISSIE) B. Apr 17, 2009, 12:06am EDT

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Kushal Poddar Apr 17, 2009, 8:22am EDT
It imakes my poem worthy. Good work.
I may add:
Ever more.
Till shadows in him evolve
to become his soul, immortal;
till he destroy the freezed frame
till he burn the photo;
a shadow.
Kushal Poddar Apr 17, 2009, 8:23am EDT
You have honored me.
Extreme energy replete throughout the deep push of this poem~
Georgiana S. Apr 17, 2009, 2:44pm EDT
Thank you all! And Poddar, You may add those lines, we can have a patchwork quilt of words
Marsha S. Apr 17, 2009, 11:13pm EDT

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William Dotani Apr 20, 2009, 1:13am EDT
The transference of a past mistake into an object that brings back a sad memory.
sandesh b. Apr 21, 2009, 8:41pm EDT
is podder a poem???
i have no any idea... sorry.
Georgiana S. Apr 21, 2009, 8:48pm EDT
Poddar Kushal, a gather poet extrodinaire!

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