by Beverly P.

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The Liar

July 17, 2008 03:40 PM EDT

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THE LIAR

By Bev P.

You hurt the world with all your lies

I tell your truths and cut your size

Your mouth is rare to speak the truth

Perhaps it stems from your youth?

I cannot stand a false pretense

Your lies just get more immense

It's sad you have no real clue

It's sad the biggest LIE is YOU

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Comments: 45

Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Jul 17, 2008, 3:48pm EDT

Thanks for posting on Getting to 3000 Together

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Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Jul 17, 2008, 3:50pm EDT

This sounds like a goot way to vent Bev.

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Randee "The Court Jester of LaLa Land ! ! !" always and forever, I just want to celebrate Jul 17, 2008, 3:50pm EDT

impressive poem Beverly,

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lena k. Jul 17, 2008, 3:54pm EDT

nice

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Peter Joseph Swanson Jul 17, 2008, 4:01pm EDT

yeah

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Elizabeth H. Jul 17, 2008, 4:18pm EDT

very good

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Olga Fragoso Jul 17, 2008, 4:21pm EDT

Very nice

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Debra C. Jul 17, 2008, 4:21pm EDT

Thought-provoking poem, Beverly. Well crafted.

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Patricia A. Jul 17, 2008, 4:29pm EDT

I like the ending!

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Sandra R. Jul 17, 2008, 4:39pm EDT

Sounds like you have been hurt deeply. I know the feeling all to well. I wrote a poem like that it's called Forgive. I have it on my myspace blog.

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Robyn F. Jul 17, 2008, 4:42pm EDT

i really like that one!!!!!!

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Rhetta A. Jul 17, 2008, 5:10pm EDT

Very expressive!

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Bonnie H. Jul 17, 2008, 5:25pm EDT

I hear ya girl!!!!! Very good

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♠~Dnbuster~♠ ~. Jul 17, 2008, 5:33pm EDT

thanks for sharing!

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Heidianna "Coriander" T. Jul 17, 2008, 5:33pm EDT

Very well spoken. :)

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Betsy C. Jul 17, 2008, 7:13pm EDT

wow... sharp indeed!

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julia w. Jul 17, 2008, 7:24pm EDT

really good work

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Renee (Pres of Baby James Foundation) ~. Jul 17, 2008, 8:14pm EDT

Good one, and good vent

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Thomas W. Jul 17, 2008, 8:59pm EDT

ouch. simple, and direct.
sometimes, these are best.
for the very worst.

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Whitney A. Jul 18, 2008, 12:18am EDT

I really liked this!

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Jan S. Jul 18, 2008, 1:39am EDT

Well done. Some people do become the lies they tell and are then unable to ever know themselves or to relate to others in a healthy way.

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Bethany C. Jul 18, 2008, 2:44am EDT

Some people lie so much they believe their own lies!

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Shelbia C. Jul 18, 2008, 4:49am EDT

Good poem.

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Ladybounty ~. Jul 18, 2008, 6:22am EDT

Boy Beverly do I know someone who fits this poem to a tee! good job!

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Sophiya S. Jul 18, 2008, 9:55am EDT

thanks for posting

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K D. Jul 18, 2008, 10:29am EDT

Sic 'em girl!

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Rebecca [Future Teacher] Jul 18, 2008, 2:04pm EDT

Great poem Bev and well said.

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Alisa Kerwood Jul 18, 2008, 3:08pm EDT

loved it

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Mickey B. Jul 18, 2008, 4:23pm EDT

Excellent!

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Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jul 18, 2008, 4:31pm EDT

very good - little anger there?

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Sandre M. Jul 18, 2008, 7:33pm EDT

Bev,

This one is great. By the way, the rolls were great, too!

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Kristen D. Jul 18, 2008, 8:24pm EDT

I like the pic you chose to go with it too.

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Lewis (taking over Gather) K. Jul 19, 2008, 5:06am EDT

Very direct.

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Kushal Poddar Jul 20, 2008, 1:01pm EDT

very powerful and pointed

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Angela A. Jul 20, 2008, 2:31pm EDT

Love the poem, and I love the pic.
Very cool!

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Sharon B. Jul 20, 2008, 4:10pm EDT

I live with someone like this. It is destroying everyone around them, me included.

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Johnny B. Jul 21, 2008, 9:06pm EDT

Very good...

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Jessica P. Jul 21, 2008, 10:19pm EDT

What a moving piece....

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Cheryl B. Jul 23, 2008, 10:52am EDT

Reminds me of a poem I wrote years ago titled "Go Ahead And Tell Me Another Lie".

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shelly voorhies Jul 23, 2008, 11:00pm EDT

Very Good!

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