Listening as the
Sea hears the moon
--Cascading flow and
Ebb undertow
Melded in
Orgasmic
Tortured ecstasy.
Creating
A thousand words
For every birds
Eye picture.
My body giving
In to my mind.
My soul somewhere
In-between
Silent worlds
Of unseen eyes and
Inward probing.
This neurotic moon
Swaying visceral waters.
Deeper currents not
Complying as yet in
This cosmic
Orgasm.
Light & matter
Darkness & void
Affecting only the surface
Pulling back in
Tide
Pushing back
To the ever-changing
Shoreline.
When affecting
Only the surface
Appears to
Be dull monotony
At the beck and call of the
Moon's every whim
Oh
And other orbs play
Their part with her.
But infinitely deeper
Dramatic ebb and flow
Cannot be witnessed
By the seagulls gaze.
The thoughts of the soul
Are faint or nil
In the patterns of
Vision-mind.
Our bodies
Listening to this galactic
Dialogue seethe
In stagnant waters
When the mind like the
Moon is all she hears
Or whatever brings
In a stronger signal.
We have taken her away
Kept her estranged as
Mutated cells eating away
Conformed to the
Image of the empty shell
Of a neural network
Caught in a degenerative loop
--A dense
Gravitational pull slowly
Leading her along
Into the vortex of the
Absence of light.
Yet something our minds
Cannot understand as
Yet is developing
Out of sight-mind after
The imploding of her
Beautiful mass
After
The burning-out of
Countless worlds
Beyond
Even the farthest reaches
Of the poetic eye
A primeval genesis before the garden
Attempting with
Greater resolve to
Orchestrate the divine
Purpose of the
Our genesis.
Rearranged
And tuned to higher
Orgasmic harmony
The new
Birth of soul leading
Body & mind
Her voice
Being the gravitational orb
Swaying visceral
Waters and deeper currents
Hopefully complying this
Time around.
Copyright © 2008 Daniel Irwin Tucker
All Rights Reserved.


Comments: 38
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Very nice write!
peace
Orgasmic
Tortured ecstasy"
wonderful. your talent is exceptional.so is the subject of this one
I gave it 10 stars
Myke
Setting her free
Soon she will be only in the outer limit of our minds
And we will send a thousand regrets through time and history.........
REV.> Glad you liked it. Also glad to finally hear from you! Cheers, Mate!
JUAN> How very true!
SHARON> Nice verse! Proud to have helped provide inspiration -- a great compliment to any writer!! Thanks!
Thanks to all for the nice comments!
I really liked "Our bodies
Listening to this galactic
Dialogue seethe ... "
Powerful!
Cheers!
It is life, pure and simple. It applies to my brother's illness and death, my mothers Alzh and her passing, it applies to my father surviving it all. It applies to me in life, being tugged and whirled along the path of wherever I need to go.
I found myself swaying, as though I were rocking a babe, as I read it. The wave feel of it was wonderful. Sea--the essence, the spark, the sustainer of life.
Simply awesome writing.
I'm so glad you shared this with us. Made my day a better balanced play.
Swish!
Wilka
JENI> CHARITY> JUAN> PODDAR> KATHRYN> JANET B.> CEENA> SHEILA> MYKE> LAWRENCE> JUDI> RUTH> JANET> BONNIE> Love what each of you felt from the poem.
DELAUNE> JENNIFER> Glad you appreciate my work.
WADE> "Thought provoking" Two words I love to hear. Thanks!
WILKA> 10 times! Whoa! Now that's the way to get more out of a poem! And each time it means something different to you. See, it's so much better to not be so definative and let the reader feel or get their own vibe. I'm sure Billy Shakespeare would have rolled over in his grave time and time again had he read of the myriad interpretations of his work. (Rolled over in joy mostly).
Thanks again my dear friends! Cheers!
You write from the heart and sould and I love it!!
You got directly in the orbit of the deeper meaning of this poem, my dear. Djon said above: "... our surface world in view of our evolving world-soul." His quote tied in with yours: 'The divine and the galaxy bring us together...' Thank you, my dear.
BHAWANA> Thanks for you comment and featuring it in 'Evoke an Emotion.'
It is really good!