Walk With Me Down By the Sea

Walk with me down by the sea

Let's see the things that we might see

Run with me then still we'll stand

And sink our toes into the sand

Let's bravely fight the crashing waves

Let's explore a pirate's cave

Talk with me and share your thoughts

Imagine battles bravely fought

Let's run along the daylit beach

and gather shells within our reach

Take a pic nic by the shore

laugh and laugh, then laugh some more

Walk with me on this fine day

Time and cares will stay away

I'm just eight and I love you so

I'll remember this as I grow

The time we spend upon the sand

The time we spend just holding hands

I'll be bigger soon and find my way

There will be more work than time for play

But all of that will have to wait

the time's today, its not too late

So walk with me down by the sea

and let's see the things that we might see.

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Sharon P. Aug 15, 2009, 5:34pm EDT

Thats nice.

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Tracy Fabre Aug 15, 2009, 6:11pm EDT

*sniffle*

It's wonderful. But in your heart, you didn't need me to tell you that.

Russell Lee Miller Aug 15, 2009, 6:45pm EDT

Thank you Tracy!

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JOHN BECK Aug 15, 2009, 6:30pm EDT

The important part is that you responded positively. And yes, he'll remember this.

Russell Lee Miller Aug 15, 2009, 6:46pm EDT

We had a great time together. I appreciate your comments John.

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Sandi S. Aug 15, 2009, 8:13pm EDT

Wow!

Russell Lee Miller Aug 16, 2009, 12:33am EDT

Thank you Sandi!

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Jennine D. Aug 15, 2009, 9:27pm EDT

Very nice a time to build memories that will not be forgotten when he is older.

Russell Lee Miller Aug 16, 2009, 12:34am EDT

I so hope you are right, Jen. I know I will hold these days precious in my memory.

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Piper Elizabeth J. Aug 15, 2009, 10:30pm EDT

Wonderfully written. Vivid descriptions of a lovely time.
Enjoy them while you can. They grow up far too quickly.

Russell Lee Miller Aug 16, 2009, 12:34am EDT

He's eight - ALREADY!

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Terry M. Aug 16, 2009, 12:11am EDT

A beautiful pic and great photo to go with it.

Russell Lee Miller Aug 16, 2009, 12:34am EDT

Thanks Terry! I appreciate you stopping by.

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Jan S. Aug 16, 2009, 2:07am EDT

This is really beautiful and a lesson to all parents. Make the time to spend with your children. They grow up so fast!

Russell Lee Miller Aug 16, 2009, 3:52am EDT

Thank you so much Jan. They do indeed.

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Beth G. Aug 16, 2009, 2:33am EDT

This was wonderful, and captures so nicely a moment in time.

Russell Lee Miller Aug 16, 2009, 3:53am EDT

Thank you Beth!

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Lady of Lake Merritt =P Aug 16, 2009, 2:54am EDT

oh gosh, that made me misty eyed! my son's starting kindergarten, i DON'T want him to grow up!!!

Russell Lee Miller Aug 16, 2009, 3:55am EDT

There are certainly joys to be found in all of it, but I agree with you. As much as I want to see my boy grow into a strong and honorable man, I wish he could stay 8 years old a little longer.

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Richard B. Aug 16, 2009, 11:50am EDT

well done, thanks

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roger s. Aug 17, 2009, 2:14pm EDT

Very Good I enjoyed yor poem

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Anita D. Aug 17, 2009, 2:39pm EDT

Besides storing this disk and online, I hope you are keeping a notebook with paper copies or a scrapbook. I enjoyed your day with your son.

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Chas Andrews Aug 17, 2009, 7:33pm EDT

thanks for the prose

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Ian B (in Toronto) Aug 17, 2009, 10:26pm EDT

Good thoughts. I love the seaside: although most of my experience has been on the shores of the Great Lakes. Similarly water to the horizon, but fresh water.

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