by Nation !!!!
Member since:
September 11, 2007

When I see you smile.....

December 06, 2008 11:45 PM EST
views: 93 | comments: 24

Another poem I was just tinkering with...Hope you like

WHEN I SEE YOU SMILE


When I see you smile from across the way.
My heart gets bright like a clear summer day.
Your smile is just like the ocean is blue.
So natural, so beautiful, so gorgeous, so true.
As you smile at me, it makes my troubles all fade.
I thank the lord above, for this angel he has made.
When I'm losing those feelings, not felt in a while.
They all come rushing back, when I see you smile.


Nation

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Comments: 24

Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Dec 6, 2008, 11:48pm EST
That is beautiful
Linda T. Dec 7, 2008, 1:48am EST
Nicely done.
Sue T. Dec 7, 2008, 1:56am EST
Gorgeous - is it about your lovely daughter, Nation? It's very uplifting.
ron h. Dec 7, 2008, 2:34am EST
CONGRATULATIONS!!! The winning video for the week of 11/29-12/5 goes to NATION for his video titled "LOGAN".
Peter Joseph Swanson Dec 7, 2008, 1:22pm EST
10 - that made me smile
APE 131313 Dec 8, 2008, 2:22am EST
Very sweet!
Fran S. Dec 8, 2008, 6:13pm EST
very nice!
wonder filled words great flow I love it
Tonya Downen Dec 12, 2008, 10:03am EST
Very good...Keep up the good work..
Curt L. Dec 12, 2008, 1:00pm EST
A charming poem!
Leigh Featherstone Dec 15, 2008, 9:58am EST
This was really nice!

Thanks for the Friend evite! I accept with pleasure1
Christine K. Dec 19, 2008, 7:11am EST
Beautiful and nicely done!
just needed to read once more needed to recall those feelings and smile
Kris P. Dec 22, 2008, 1:15pm EST
Absolutely beautiful! It leaves me feeling all warm inside.
Kevin E. Dec 22, 2008, 1:22pm EST
This is a touchingly beautiful poem. Wow!
Judy Kiser Dec 22, 2008, 1:26pm EST
This is beautiful son! I'm so proud of you!!!!
Janie E. Dec 27, 2008, 6:07am EST
You feel for your daughter the same way I feel about mine!!!!! Thanks for this!!!
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Dec 27, 2008, 8:19pm EST
Truely beautiful!!!!
:D :D Sending 10 your way!!!: D : D
Sandi S. Dec 29, 2008, 1:20am EST
Aww!
Sandi S. Dec 29, 2008, 1:20am EST
This is very nice, simple and serene.
Lisa Madona U. Dec 30, 2008, 12:10pm EST
This is beautiful I love it!!!

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rainne chandler Mar 9, 2009, 12:22pm EDT
very lovely

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