Rain pounds on the ground
Mother Earth breathes with relief
Life –blood soaks dry veins
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April H.
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December 22, 2005 My Summertime Haiku
June 24, 2009 04:29 PM EDT
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Rain pounds on the ground Mother Earth breathes with relief Life –blood soaks dry veins
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Comments: 17
good one
Yes, very nice haiku, April. I love it.
this is beautiful
thanks for sharing . your poem..
Very nice~
This is very good April
Thanks everyone!
Nice haiku April
...bout time to try my hand at some Haiku
excellent
awesome
i take it you enjoyed the storm the other day.
I did! My plants enjoyed it even more....
My plants are languishing in the heat we are having. I try to keep the watered, but the temperature is 103 degrees and it's very hard on the flowers. Sigh.
I loved this one, it reminded me of my flowers.
That's what inspired it - my poor flowers trying to hang on in all of this heat and dryness! You could practically hear them breathe a sigh of relief when we got that hard rain!
Very nice - refreshing
lovely and inspired~
luv this nature poem! 10