by Chuck L.

Member since:
January 19, 2009

"SHE"

February 27, 2009 09:07 PM EST (Updated: May 17, 2009 02:35 PM EDT)

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She

Came to me

When I was cold and lost

And made me found again

She

Came to me

When I was strong and hot

And made me love again

She

Came to me

When I was out and gone

And made me come around

She

Came to me

And I was warm and loved

And I knew not what to do

She

Came to me

And loved me long and warm

And I loved her and love

And she

Came to me

Tags: poem, poetry, love, she, points nation

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Comments: 46

Beth G. Feb 27, 2009, 9:22pm EST

This was a wonderful piece of poetry! Thanks for sharing!

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Always Tillie M. Feb 27, 2009, 9:40pm EST

nice

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Tee B. Feb 27, 2009, 10:12pm EST

Nice

with Post Your Heart Out!

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Chuck L. Feb 27, 2009, 10:15pm EST

Just wondered if I could still do an off the cuff piece. When the Prompt folks showed up with Woman, I had to try.

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Kris P. Feb 27, 2009, 10:22pm EST

Very nice Chuck.

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Nancy S. Feb 27, 2009, 10:46pm EST

That was a good try Chuck. Very nice.

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Marsha S. Feb 27, 2009, 11:01pm EST

pretty cool

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Barbara M. Feb 28, 2009, 1:54am EST

10 4 u thanks for sharing

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Chuck L. Feb 28, 2009, 9:29am EST

Doggone it! I forgot about the 50-word limit. Ah, well.

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James B. Feb 28, 2009, 10:12am EST

Thanks for posting to All Top Ten Lists!

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Jennifer Lee Feb 28, 2009, 12:11pm EST

Beautiful, thank you for sharing your talent!

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Svetlana Goryacheva Feb 28, 2009, 2:05pm EST

Excellent, dear Chuck, and I'm happy to see you among my friends! :-)

Warmly from Moscow, Russia - S.

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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 28, 2009, 2:09pm EST

You amazed me,Chuck.This is so sweet and just brilliant.A kinda of play on words feelings mixed with emotions.Love poured in me...a big wow!

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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 28, 2009, 2:10pm EST

Thanks for posting to

(Woman~ theme)

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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 28, 2009, 2:14pm EST

Featured:)

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Jennifer Lee Feb 28, 2009, 3:38pm EST

Congratulations on the feature and thank you for posting to our group.

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Shelbia C. Feb 28, 2009, 7:09pm EST

This is great

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Vic Needs Coffee Feb 28, 2009, 7:55pm EST

Very cool.

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Elsie Duggan Feb 28, 2009, 9:09pm EST

Wonderful Chuck, you have had love in your life.

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Theresa M. Mar 1, 2009, 9:07am EST

Beautimous

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Vicky P. Mar 1, 2009, 9:07am EST

Very nice

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Nancy Biri Mar 1, 2009, 9:09am EST

Nice

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Joseph Breunig Mar 1, 2009, 9:32am EST

A lovely and emotive piece; nicely done. --Joe

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Ratan . Mar 1, 2009, 11:55am EST

A vivid description of the one you love the most! Its a beauty of a verse.

You may also like She.

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Sandre M. Mar 1, 2009, 12:54pm EST

Chuck, it's funny that my husband and I were just talking about a similar sentiment about our own relationship; the way you can tell that relationships "work" is whether or not that person is there and can keep loving you, keep a sense of humor and make you feel loved in good times and in bad.
Thanks for sharing this piece!

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Chuck L. Mar 1, 2009, 1:21pm EST

Sandre - There's a companion poem called "We" that you might enjoy. Be warned - it's "Adult."

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♥ Liza ♥ K. Mar 1, 2009, 2:15pm EST

nice

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kimberly g. Mar 1, 2009, 4:41pm EST

nice poem chuck.

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theresa s. Mar 1, 2009, 5:07pm EST

thanks for sharing

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Georgiana S. Mar 1, 2009, 7:09pm EST

nice poem

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Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. Mar 2, 2009, 9:50am EST

sweet and rhytmic poetic flow

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Kushal Poddar Mar 2, 2009, 10:57am EST

It is simple and touching. Great one.

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Thank you.

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Great piece of work!

Thanks for posting in Journey Into Poetry !

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Janie E. Apr 20, 2009, 1:01am EDT

Wow!!!

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Patty Mayonaise May 17, 2009, 3:56pm EDT

'she' sounds great

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Jan S. May 18, 2009, 12:44am EDT

Lovely! Thanks for posting to Fugitives from Ignorance, Conformity, and Peer Pressure

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