Your Fifth Prompt is "Squish".- messy...

My dishwasher has broken down.

I am wanting to act like a clown.

Dishes piled to the sky.

this really isn't a lie.

i lie in flith and decay.

i do not want to do the dishes!

I just want to lay.

When I got home the other day.

Much to my dismay.

I stepped on somethng squishy

I looked down and it was something fishy.

I bent down to pick it up.

when I looked up I relised my place was a dump.

but what had I step on

I looked down in my hand and it was a lemon.

I realy need to clean up this dump.

Comments: 18

amy s. Apr 9, 2008, 3:36pm EDT

I really do have to clean up my act before I get a cat

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juley g. Apr 9, 2008, 3:39pm EDT

Just hire a housekeeper, Amy! You work hard! You deserve a break! ;)

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Peter Joseph Swanson Apr 9, 2008, 6:47pm EDT

yuck

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amy s. Apr 11, 2008, 1:45pm EDT

i properly should hire a house keeper. i just need to clean the house

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Susan B. Apr 12, 2008, 12:07am EDT

Yikes! Good thing it's just a poem :)

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Jay M. Apr 12, 2008, 2:59am EDT

Thats a ten! Ha Ha Ha...

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Elsie Duggan Apr 13, 2008, 1:47am EDT

I need help too Amy, lol, so far so good in the new place but only here a month and a half, give me a little time, and I will be going squish in the night too, cute poem, and so true for many of us.

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amy s. Apr 14, 2008, 5:50pm EDT

I just picked up my place and what a wonderful look it has now.

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Tracey W. Apr 14, 2008, 7:42pm EDT

Your poems really are a riot Amy!

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Austin Cushing Apr 14, 2008, 11:05pm EDT

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necee t. Apr 15, 2008, 12:45am EDT

oh Amy... this was quite funny... but i've been there too... i've started using paper plates and taking the easy way out... hehe... take care...

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Patti M. Apr 15, 2008, 4:08am EDT

Amy, been there done that. Hire the houekeeper it saves on your time. Great poem.

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Lyn Owen Apr 15, 2008, 2:42pm EDT

Makes me feel like cleaning.

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amy s. Apr 15, 2008, 7:16pm EDT

dude i always need to clean the house is there ever a time you don't clean? i can not afford to hire a housekeeper.

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Sheila Deeth Apr 15, 2008, 7:16pm EDT

A lemon's not so bad... Maggie doesn't let anything related to food lie around too long, except when she steals bananas and leaves the skins on the floor.

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