by Juan J Martinez
Member since:
November 9, 2006

Perdido

January 31, 2008 06:10 PM EST (Updated: January 31, 2008 11:07 PM EST)
views: 862 | rating: 10/10 (10 votes) | comments: 14

Solo y basillo yo fui

un hombre sin suenos o amor

un mundo frio y sin color

Todo antes de mi preciosa flor

 

Yo sin tu amor estoy perdido

Sin tus besos y caricias no puedo sequir          (Chorus)

Tu eres mi razon para vivir

La propia duena de mi corazon

 

A hora puedo ver un futuro

Lleno de azules y rojos

Lleno de tu fuego y calor

Una vida completa y bella

 

Yo sin tu amor estoy perdido

Sin tus besos y caricias no puedo sequir          (Chorus)

Tu eres mi razon para vivir

La propia duena de mi corazon

(Still working on the melody, it feels like it needs another verse. But for the moment, this my song and entry, for the Musica Latina's Valetine's Day Contest.)

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Comments: 14

Doyle ( IS SOOO 7 for 7 soon... ) C. Jan 31, 2008, 6:21pm EST
El comienzo pareció triste. Hermoso, aunque triste. Muy bien escrito.

Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
Donna Besso Jan 31, 2008, 7:49pm EST
I know pequito (?) Spanish.
Georgiana S. Jan 31, 2008, 8:04pm EST
do you have a melody?
Carol Lloyd Jan 31, 2008, 8:20pm EST
good one ty for sharing
Juan J Martinez Jan 31, 2008, 11:04pm EST
Georgiana, I am still working on the melody.
Mary Ann S. Jan 31, 2008, 11:31pm EST
Sounds great.
~*~Nina~*~ R. Feb 1, 2008, 12:51am EST
I just finished translating this, and it's so beautiful!
Juan J Martinez Feb 1, 2008, 1:20am EST
It stills needs some tweaking and another verse. Once I add the music, I can then fine tune the words and give it a little better flow.
CC Miranda the artrat (or am i?) Feb 1, 2008, 1:24am EST
i will have to see if i can get a translator page to translate this correctly cause i'm sure it's lovely.
~*~Nina~*~ R. Feb 1, 2008, 9:42am EST
Hey John,
Will you be making a video so that we can hear it?
Juan J Martinez Feb 1, 2008, 9:49am EST
I was thinking about it.
~*~Nina~*~ R. Feb 1, 2008, 10:24am EST
Go for it! I'm sure that it would be a hit!!!!
Mary Ann S. Feb 2, 2008, 8:38pm EST
I wish I could read it.
ines r. Jul 15, 2008, 10:00pm EDT
Lo hiciste otra vez Juan,
un 10 para ti!
Cuando vemos el video?
:)

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