Mujer con corazon de roca
Hermosa y fria como el invierno
Me enganaste con tu sonrisa
Me enganaste con tus besos
Como un tonto creer tus mentiras
Y ahora me hallo solo y sin fe
Sin condiciones te di mi amor
Pediendo nada en cambio
Esperando nada en regreso
Mujer de corazone de roca
Hermosa y fria como el inveirno
Me eganaste con tu palabras
Me eganaste con tu promesas
Y ahora me hallo solo y sin fe
(This a song I am working on. I want to make into a corrido, which is a Spanish country type of song. It is just a rough draft. It is about a woman with a heart of stone, who betrayed, the singer of the song.)


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Hermosa y fria como el invierno/ Beautiful and cold like Winter
Me enganaste con tu sonrisa/ You lied to me with your smile
Me enganaste con tus besos/ You lied to me with kisses
Y ahora me hallo solo y sin fe/ Now I find myself alone and without faith
Sin condiciones te di mi amor/ Without conditions I gave you my love
Pediendo nada en cambio/ Asking nothing in return
Esperando nada en regreso/ Waiting for nothing in exchange
Thank you so much!
Beautiful pain!
Heartbreaking in any language...but in Spanish the sting of betrayal is tempered by the beauty of the words....
Graçias!
I'm sure the music will be as beautiful...poignantly so...lots of guitar?
Can't wait for the CD! :)
Also, the format here is not a corrido, which has some fairly specific formal requirements.
This is like a ballada.
If you are interested in corridos, I would heavily suggest a GREAT book on them by Elija Wald.
It's called "Narcocorrido", but that's a publisher marketing ploy...actually it's about the corrido's soul and role, with some mention of the narco subform.
Check it out, it's not just a good book on this subject, it's a very remarkable piece of research and writing.