by M C.

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November 11, 2008

Into Fall

September 10, 2009 07:56 PM EDT (Updated: September 10, 2009 07:57 PM EDT)

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Morning breeze across my skin

There's a crispness in the air.

For a moment, all seems serene.

As fall makes its way back once again.

MD Cox

2009

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JOHN BECK Sep 10, 2009, 8:07pm EDT

Nicely expressed, M C.

M C. Sep 10, 2009, 8:08pm EDT

Thank you, John.

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Georgiana S. Sep 10, 2009, 8:25pm EDT

96 here today!

M C. Sep 10, 2009, 8:34pm EDT

Ouch ! Up here in the 'other' California, it's warm, but the morning was lovely.

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Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Sep 10, 2009, 11:21pm EDT

NO crispness where I live. lol But reading your poem makes me think of a place that has it.... very nice.

M C. Sep 11, 2009, 1:53am EDT

It'll soon be there, too ! :)

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William Dotani Sep 15, 2009, 7:32am EDT

Lovely timely soothing verse.

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Turkey Casserole Sep 15, 2009, 5:51pm EDT

simple and very "free"

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William Dotani Sep 21, 2009, 3:04pm EDT

I reread this and felt it a sublime snapshot.

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(Jasper,(Disciple for Christ. w. Sep 23, 2009, 10:02pm EDT

That is great MC.

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