by David P.
Member since:
February 14, 2007

Undeniably

July 18, 2008 12:42 AM EDT (Updated: July 28, 2008 10:53 AM EDT)
views: 112 | comments: 13

I know you have felt it
the surge in your inner core
when sensors in the soul
ignite with numinous energy
vibrant
when something like
rich liquid life flows through your being

Affecting everything within
this other-worldly force
impacts as well and markedly
your perspective of externals
brilliant
does the world appear
as though the universe itself  takes notice now of you

And looking to the one you've joined
you recognize slices of yourself
not known before your meeting
and this one seeing too in you
belonging
from the beginning
now you recognize and can't deny this love
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Comments: 13

t b. Jul 18, 2008, 12:56am EDT
This is nice David.
Susan B. Jul 18, 2008, 12:58am EDT
Terrific! Thank you for posting your poem in Poetry Please
Michelle W. Jul 18, 2008, 8:09am EDT
Very nice, romantic

peace
Andrea Grenadier Jul 18, 2008, 9:19am EDT
David, this is really beautiful; one of your best. It absolutely surges, and every word propels it forward. Most wonderful!
Granny Janny H. Jul 18, 2008, 11:09am EDT
Jeweled slices of perception
Champion love
William Dotani Jul 20, 2008, 4:12am EDT
Really nice rapid flow. I especially liked the last stanza. It is beautiful in its feeling.
Eucliffe L. Jul 20, 2008, 5:10am EDT
did you deliberately choose 'IGNIGHT' as opposed to ignite ? the link with 'numinous ' conjures up a feeling of a burst of energy in the 'night' recesses of being.........rather like the illuminations of deep sea livers in the benthos. Janet Louise H. encapsulates the expression.
Sheila Deeth Jul 21, 2008, 12:36pm EDT
Neat poem. Fascinating.
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Jul 21, 2008, 12:45pm EDT
Very nice !!!
Mike Ellwood Jul 21, 2008, 4:48pm EDT
An exceptional evocation of one of those moments that are occasionally granted to us.
amy s. Jul 21, 2008, 7:39pm EDT
congratulations on a great poem
Arduinna Hunter Nov 13, 2008, 12:37pm EST
I really enjoy the way your words create a sense of being. Its kind of like looking in a mirror and realizing that someone has been standing behind you all along. Nicely done!
Svetlana Goryacheva Nov 16, 2008, 7:51am EST
Again, I absolutely loved it... thank you for these soul-inspiring verses, dear David! ;-)

Blessings and best wishes - S.

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