
"The Front Porch Swing"
My memory bank overflows with interest
When I call to mind, my reign as a princess.
My canopied throne, known as the front porch swing,
Delighted my reign with the thrill it would bring.
Limits were known and respected as such;
Perhaps that was why I adored it so much.
It took me to heights of glorious pleasure
I still recall and endeavor to measure.
Sealed forever in my mind is this prized friend
Who companioned my mornings; blessed my day's end.
My memory bank overflows with interest
When I call to mind, my reign as a princess.
My canopied throne, known as the front porch swing,
Delighted my reign with the thrill it would bring.
Until brother, the jack, and sister, the queen,
Upended my reign once they entered the scene.
We sparred and wrangled as they reminded me,
"The swing was designed for the seating of three."
Back and forth we would go at erratic heights
No longer was swinging bestowing delights.
I relinquished my throne to my jack and queen;
Resorted to thoughts over which I could glean.
My memory bank overflows with interest
When I call to mind, my reign as a princess.
Limits were known and respected as such;
Perhaps that was why I adored it so much.
Soon we three siblings would forgive and forget;
Seat ourselves on the swing, and laugh at our debt*.
Ere long they would part, and relinquish to me
My beloved throne that was sacred to me.
The delight of its venue quickly returned,
And my status as princess was reconfirmed.
I'd swing for hours, feel the breeze blow my hair,
Engage in the moment, with nary a care.
My memory bank overflows with interest
When I call to mind, my reign as a princess.
© Barbra L.
*-preen; to groom; tidy
*laugh at our debt; find humor in why we sought forgiveness
*note; the word 'interest' can have two or three syllables (in-ter-est or inte-rest)
The Licentia Rhyme Form style of poetry is a form designed by Laura Lamarca.
*It consists of 3, 12-line stanzas with 11 syllables in each line.
*Its rhyming pattern is: aabbccddeeAA, BBffgghhiiAA, CCjjkkllmmAA
Lines 1 & 2, which begin the first stanza, are repeated at the end of stanzas one, two and three (and are italicized in my poem).
Lines 3 & 4 from stanza one, begin the first and second lines of stanza two.
Lines 5 & 6 from stanza one, begin the first and second lines of stanza three.
*The poem is for Tracey W.'s Poetry Please group challenge which was for members to use the prompt word "three" in poetry writing.


Comments: 53
'I'd swing for hours, feel the breeze blow my hair,
Engage in the moment, ....'
Loved reading it.
This is a lovely style with a great story interwoven within its boundaries. I love the playful overtone, the sibling rivalry coupled with the reconciliation and regain of the princess status.
I liked, too, the significance you have given to the lines that were to be repeated. Thank you for the explanation of this beautiful style. It simplifies the reading of it so well.
C.F., You, too, are a ray of sushine. I always appreciate your in-depth reading and your perceptive thoughts. I was happy that you read it to your wife, too. Tell her I am grateful. God Bless, my friend.
Lora: How nice of you to stop by and leave your kind words. I am very pleased you have visited. Thank you.
Congratulations on your well-deserved win.
I am one of six who had three, and I got to watch the roles shuffle from child to child, the pecking order, and power lines get established as they grew. Now, as adults, I get to watch them grow and interact while they remain loving to each other. How sweet, sometimes, life is.
Thank you for sharing your words.
Wilka
Patti: Thank you a lot for stopping by, reading and leaving your kind words. You are always encouraging.
Kathy: Thank you for sharing about your family. I bet you and they have some great memories! Thanks for your comments.
Congratulations...
*You, in your new avatar, are rich with beauty. You are "Gather's Cover Girl".
It seems a complicated form, but you make it look easy, Barbra.
And I like this. Very much.
As MIKE has pronounced well in words true !!!
Appreciate your visit. I agree; that front porch swing needs to be a must for children! I'm glad you have memories from its venue, too. Thank you for stopping by! Enjoyed your visit.
*I love your avatar. It is so sweet!!!
Love and hugs - S.
What a beautiful, beautiful compliment!!!
" the master's hand is obvious in every stanza."... no greater compliment could I have had, dear friend. I am deeply honored. Thank you so much.