"YOU didn't" by René A. ~ "Single Word Challenge" - 32nd Prompt ~ "Worry" [Poetry Please]  "YOU didn't" by René I am not asking you again Nor will I worry nor suffer my friend Over and over I look to you asking you questions about what to do But whatever you say is never the deal Whatever you give is never real So I sit and I think Then I ponder the thought of how on earth you think that I can possibly be bought I may work for pay just to do what you say But let it be known that my nerves you won't fray! By René A. Copyright © René A. ~2008 ~ ALL RIGHTS RESERVED |
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Blessings ~
Rene
I like the short rhythm to it and it flows very nicely. Great wording and imagery as well.
your poem is beautiful and contains real issues...Wow
Blessings ~
Rene