by Curt L.
Member since:
November 1, 2007

A Haiku for Jean, just the teensiest bit odd, F. & You!

September 03, 2009 10:34 PM EDT (Updated: September 04, 2009 11:07 AM EDT)
views: 287 | comments: 32

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Pink putti plague me

& mouthy muses murmur

in my padded cell.

 

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Comments: 32

Alison H. Sep 3, 2009, 11:27pm EDT
Wow, Curt. That's all I can say right now.....it can't be all bad?
Ellie !. Sep 3, 2009, 11:54pm EDT
Yesterday, they let the nut out of the nut house for the day.
Hugs to the coolest nut on Gather.
xoxxoxo
Ellie !. Sep 3, 2009, 11:54pm EDT
Now, people think I'm nuts. Oh, well. Aren't we all a little off?
JOHN BECK Sep 4, 2009, 9:01am EDT
Hmmmmm.
Ann M. (Site Scryer) Sep 4, 2009, 9:04am EDT
Curt, you can make any topic amusing!

Thank you for posting to The Surreal Circus. You are now featured.
Curt L. Sep 4, 2009, 11:09am EDT
Thank you very much, Ann!
Kimber L. Sep 4, 2009, 9:32am EDT
Ha ha ha ha I love this one!
Patti M. Sep 4, 2009, 9:50am EDT
This speaks to that little bit of imbalance in all of us.
penni d. Sep 4, 2009, 9:55am EDT
In the padded cell
he dreams that all is well
From sweet young angels dancing in his head
and muses whispering in his ear
he quite forgets he is alone
And tells the docs to ~BEGONE~
Curt L. Sep 4, 2009, 11:10am EDT
Love it, Penni! :-)
Veronica Hosking Sep 4, 2009, 11:54am EDT
love the alliteration in the first line. I wrote an entire haiku with alliteration once; it wasn't easy.
Peter Joseph Swanson Sep 4, 2009, 11:56am EDT
ha ha - that was fun
DIANE D. Sep 4, 2009, 12:31pm EDT
Neat~
Cristina S. Sep 4, 2009, 4:54pm EDT
the pink angles - ok - but the mouthy muses - Curt, du uebertriffst dich selbst!
Curt L. Sep 6, 2009, 3:33pm EDT
Thank you so much, Cristina!
William Dotani Sep 7, 2009, 10:52pm EDT
Did Cristina just talk about a pizza topping in German?
Elaine S. Sep 4, 2009, 6:46pm EDT
I'm Smiling
lynn a. Sep 6, 2009, 1:51am EDT
Which mouthy muses? There's a lot.

And, asylum type cell, or a cell in a convent?
Curt L. Sep 6, 2009, 3:32pm EDT
Lynn, the muses are muttering so incessantly I can't get their names!

Asylum cell...(do convents have padded cells?).
Deb J. Sep 6, 2009, 9:24am EDT
Cute haiku Curt! Hope you are having a super Labor Day weekend!
William Dotani Sep 7, 2009, 10:51pm EDT
Is this what you said to the priest in the confessional?
Curt L. Sep 8, 2009, 1:00pm EDT
Ha! :-)
Donna Besso Sep 10, 2009, 9:19pm EDT
Man, that's really deep.
necee t. Sep 14, 2009, 3:42pm EDT
very interesting and cute... as always... xo
Donald M. Sep 15, 2009, 2:06pm EDT
Is it a person we know with the mouthy muse, that should be in a padded cell?

Prehaps most of us. LOL. Just call me Ralph the Mouth, I have "Happy Days".
Butch B. Sep 18, 2009, 3:06pm EDT
Very interesting though I have not run across Jean yet and am not sure what this is about.
Oh you must go read jean just a tinsy bit odd's writing she is amazing
t b. Sep 19, 2009, 6:24pm EDT
Lol, perfect fit!
Sheila Deeth Sep 23, 2009, 3:40pm EDT
'Tis the teensiest bit odd and all. I really like it.
Ruth Luce Sep 24, 2009, 9:55am EDT
Heehehe!! My muse is quite the mouthy one as well, too fun! =~P
Donald M. Sep 29, 2009, 3:35pm EDT
Hmmm LOL I just thought someone had pink bubble gum in their mouth, smacking away.
Wilma M. Oct 12, 2009, 5:29pm EDT
Hope you get out of the padded cell on the weekend.

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