JOY!!

I am here

And JOY is back

My heart is beating

No love I lack

I am full

I am free

God is truly

A part of me!

As time moves on

His will be done

And I will find

The special one

My other half

For, you see

God has plans

For you and me.

It is no longer

Faith I lack

For, you see

My JOY is back!

Comments: 28

Amber M. Sep 30, 2008, 1:47pm EDT

nice poem

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Elaine S. Sep 30, 2008, 1:49pm EDT

Very nice lisa I Like it!

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Missy Cline Sep 30, 2008, 1:54pm EDT

lovely!

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Alison H. Sep 30, 2008, 1:59pm EDT

Nice and upbeat!

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Cheryl W. Sep 30, 2008, 2:03pm EDT

Good one, Lisa!

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Carline B. Sep 30, 2008, 2:50pm EDT

Lovely poem Lisa. I love it.

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Lisa Frost Sep 30, 2008, 3:16pm EDT

Thank you all very much! I appreciate your comments!

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Sharon C. Sep 30, 2008, 3:32pm EDT

I see the medication is working, LOL no seriously I am happy to see you more joyful

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John Doyle Sep 30, 2008, 3:35pm EDT

Well done!!. I will make one suggestion. Rhymed poetry is IMO the most difficult to write as you are trying to deal with the rhyme sceme at the same time as the thought Keep writing

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Lisa Frost Sep 30, 2008, 3:37pm EDT

John~ I know it can be difficult, yet, oddly enough, I have more trouble writing other things. I hope you will check out other things I have written when you have time. I would love your feedback.

Thank you Sharon! You are not the only one! lol

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Randee "The Court Jester of LaLa Land ! ! !" always and forever, I just want to celebrate Sep 30, 2008, 3:59pm EDT

I really really love this poem Lisa ! ! !
thanks ..............

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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Sep 30, 2008, 4:40pm EDT

Faith,I lack... your give me strength to revive my thoughts.

beautiful

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Donald M. Sep 30, 2008, 6:41pm EDT

Lisa it was great. When you have Faith and turn it over to God. He will send the right person at the right time. When you do the choosing, it doesnt always turn out as you expect.

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Angela A. Sep 30, 2008, 7:07pm EDT

Ah, the blessings of joy!
Lovely, my friend.
Keep that smile and keep your head up.

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Stephannie H. Sep 30, 2008, 9:19pm EDT

thanks for sharing with us

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Christine P. Oct 1, 2008, 8:11am EDT

This was absolutely beautiful! An inspiring poem.

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~Lady Neeetah of California~Obama #44 W. Oct 1, 2008, 5:26pm EDT

I'm so happy for you, Lisa.

The poem is light, free, and yes, joyous.

It's the way life should be.

Thank you for sharing it!

Blessings to you!

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Liz [site-raven] Oct 1, 2008, 11:33pm EDT

Absolutely wonderful............and I am glad that you are feeling so good.

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Mary Standard Oct 2, 2008, 2:44am EDT

I love this poem, Lisa!!! Thank you so much for sharing part of it at my site. You are a special encourager and reminding me of God and His help always does a person good!!! =0)

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